This was perfect.

I remember reading this a few years back and absolutely adoring it and came back to find it again and loved it all over! Thank you!

Simply beautiful. Thank you.

together still

I have read many stories for this show but I have never read one as beautifully and perfectly written as yours. Usually stories will have at least one flaw but yours is now the only story I have read that was completely flawless. Thank you for writing this story and creating a more realistic and emotional ending to this episode! This is truly a fantastic piece!

This is hands down one of my favorite pieces of work of any kind and I am an avid reader. The show does have a tendency to rush the ending and can be unrealistic at times. I too was severely unimpressed with how it actually ended as well.

This will always be in my mind as how it ended now. You captured the emotions exquisitely. Thank you for writing this.

Though I want more, I must admit it is best where you have left it.

Well Done.

Well Done.

I love your writing style, so powerful.

Well written.

Love those last two lines. Brilliant story.

Bravo. The ending of that episode irked me a lot too.

Yep! Def like ur version a lot better!

I hope that one day i can have as much tallent in my whole body as you have in a pinkie. You are one of my favorite authors here and your amazing. Keep it up.

Beautifully written! I just rewatched season two, and the end of this episode still irritates me. Your ending is much better, and far more plausible.

I'm really late here, but, This Story is AMAZING! An infinite amount times better than a surprise party. Really?! Just wow, so beautiful and believable!
Wish this is how it happened. A lot of these amazing writers (you included obviously) should be a part of this show. Emmys everywhere.
Thank you for this!