This story should be a real cartoon movie it was the best story I've ever read

Q HERMOSO...ESTOY LLORANDO, Q COÑOUN HIJO Y SE CASAN Q BELLO

AWWWW, POBRE DUDLEY, SU AMOR NO PUEDE SER SIEMPRE LINDO

PUTA MARE OHE, DOBLE PROBLEMA.
CARAJO ESTO SI Q S PONE BUENO, ETO S PONE CALIENT

This is SO sweet! You should TOTALLY make a sequel!

Aww such a cute story. I like how you showed their feelings for each other. Well done!

that was beutiful, almost made me cry

AW! SO CUTE!

Ok if you can make an amazing romantic drama fanfiction in only 8 chapters then you should make movies in that genre or soap operas. I thought I was going to cry when Kitty was in a coma, when she died, and when Dudley proposed. You better write that sequel soon.

Wow great story! The ending seemed really rushed though. I expect you could have done better, but I also understand that you might have just wanted to get it over with. Either way, I liked the plot and story and I hope the sequel can fill in some of the blanks here. Good luck and Great job! :)

Excellentado! This is the Most greatest Story ever! You're now declared the most greatest love story author! (If there was only awards in Fanfiction)

AWESOME! I've been waiting for this chapter forever! And it was worth the wait! Kitty's alive, she and Dudley are engaged, and they have a baby boy! Great fic Lunerpet, definitely one of my favs!

Update soon!

Omg! I started reading and couldn't stop! A few spelling mistakes or such, but nothing incomprehensible at least. Lot's of action and suspense; LOVE IT! Hope you update before I have a heart attack! I LITERALLY can't wait!

Oh now THAT'S a major amount of drama right there! Either leave her in a coma and save the kid, or take the kid out and let her live! Oh man I can't wait to see what happenes next! Keep em' coming man, this is great!