Amazing story! Thank you!

Brilliant story.

Outstanding.

Yet another story with that annoying bitch granger what is wrong with people wasn't it supposed to be harry and Susan but no u have to add that annoying bitch to spoil iy

Well this chapter was enjoyable, i'm not really a fan of Dumbledore's but, Draco if i remember in some stories is a friend of Harry's well one of the fun parts in writing fan fiction is doing things differently is all i am saying! Just my own opinion, until the next review.

I, like Harry/Susan stories in Harry Potter fanfic's and also Harry/Daphne and Harry/Fleur to name a few. But there are not too many stories with these two. Well until the next review!

Beautifully plotted and fairly well-written. It's a complex story, and, although it dragged on at times, it was worth reading to the end. Loved Hermione, Susan and Luna.

The only thing that pops into my mind about this chapter is the way Hermione acts towards her supposed best friends. If she had done that to me again, I would have gone to my bedroom and not talked to her until school started. And if they had made me as angry with their coyness, I would have locked everyone out... Especially Hermione since she didn't trust me to see her when her hair turned colors

Job well done. Like the different spin on the story. It had a few plot lines I haven’t seen yet that is hard to come by with the amount of stories I have read. Thank you for the share.

This is frustrating... i know there is another story out there with the same premise as this,,, draco warns them about snape.. snape duels them and the epilouge is the same.. i just cant place it grrrrrrr...

This is probably a pointless post, but when tonks and Harry are springing Luna, why would they get cocky and take off their advantage of using the invisibility cloaks? I mean sure they could try and get some laughs by playing Bellatrix and the prisoner but that’s a half cocked plan at best.

Great story, the first Susan/Harry bond i've read, and the first i actually read till the end, i got a little pissed of in the middle cuz of the hermione/harry drama, but eventually it made sense. thank you for this lovely read.

It was funny the reaction of Bill, the ritual is very interesting to work and And which of the two will get pregnant?

Was really enjoying the story. But I can't stand Hermione! It said Harry and Susan not Harry and Hermione

Great story! A bit too grim sometimes, but loved the end!