beautiful :)

Very funny. I loved this one. I was laughing throughout the whole story. You didn't even make any mistakes, so well done on that too!

Awwww. Just, awww. Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. Everywhere.

Things That Gain Kudos For You:

1. Verbs, lovely variation. You never use said or walked and it's quite magnificent.

2. Snappy dialogue, really genuinely funny. Life should be a script or something.

3. Characterisation, I already have a feel for the characters and their specific voices. I hate when people use first person and switch and interrupt the narrative to say 'So-and-So's POV' because if you're a good writer, you can /tell/ who it is without the need for that.

4. Using old cliched plot devices and making them still very fluffy and adorable.

5. You make me feel things for your portrayals~ awwww.

6. I LOVE SPOONING. IT'S ONE OF MY FAVOURITES.

"how could any one person be so heavy? Did he have a mutation that meant his arms turned to lead at night or something?"

- If this were the case Erik, you could just manipulate him to get off. But even if you could - Would you want to?

Sweet and fluffy story. Well done.

Sure, it was OOC, but don't we all want them to be a little OOC? We saw at the end of the movie how things ended with them being all "in Character". It's better for them this way.

Still, I pitty the receptionist ;)

Beautiful, sweet, and hilarious. Their back-and-forth captures so much of their personality, and you wrote it splendidly.

I adore the last line, as well.

Kudos on a wonderful piece of writing!

~Kitty

This was not only ludicrously fluffy (you do have a point there), but also quite fun, nicely in character (a bagful of books and pinstriped pyjamas, 'nuff said...) and absolutely wonderfully written! (That, and the author's note, which deserves a review all by itself for inducing uncontrollable laughter.) Great job!

This is just too adorable _ Ahh, I needed some ludicrous fluff. Been reading too many fics of the 'soul-destroying angst' variety. Thanks for sharing this!

This is honestly one of the most adorable things I have ever read; it reminds me of the times I've shared a bed with one of my best friends, and we always seem to end up spooning, and tossed right over each other. We always wake up with a laugh on those days.

Aw so cute .

My adoration for this story is seemingly boundless. Please write more. Oh please Oh please oh please! 3

awwwwww...so cute!