interesting beginning, i hope you continue it someday :)

What happens next?

Your story is interesting, and I am going to see how you develop it from this promising start.

I LOVE IT, KEEP WRITING PLZ

You should finish this story, I feel like it had just begun before you quit. Come back!

So sad u did not finish reads like it would have been a good AU

Well, I hope you decide to finish this story one day because I enjoyed it so far. You mentioned in the last chapter that you hate unfinished stories, well...me too :(

I saw you started a new one, but I think I might wait to see how far into it you get before I start reading, because unfinished work is always frustrating.

Anyway, this was really great, and if you get inspired by the upcoming movie to revisit this, ill be watching for an alert.

will madison and veronica become friends? i hope u continue

Just started reading your story, hope you continue!

I really like this story so far. Please keep in mind that the following advice is just to help you touch up your already great writing:

The writing sounds a bit weird sometimes. I mean, it works, but it just seems a little off. Also, there are a few minor grammar and syntax errors (you're instead of your, etc.). Maybe you could get a beta? Spelling doesn't seem to be a problem, though, which is good.

Okay, this is just me, but Veronica's insults seem a bit lame. They don't pack the same dry wit as she usually does. I can understand that the effect might be hard to replicate, though.

Other than those two things, everything is great. I love the plot idea, and I think everything is playing out perfectly. Great story!

I am really enjoying the story. You followed one of my favorite ways to create a story by making a small change that ripples out and makes big changes throughout the fandom until everything changes. I like how Veronica isn't a victim in this story. She decided to get tough, even without the trauma of being raped. I also like that her trust issues, while still being significant (lost her mother, friends betrayed her), aren't pathological (raped as well).

Madison is being surprisingly cordial. My only nitpick with the story is that she was so shallow on the show that she might as well have been a rainy street. Madison in your story is a better person. I am not sure that almost being raped would be enough to do it. But maybe. I look forward to wherever you take this story.

I hope to be able to read an update soon. Of course I made this story a favorite. Thanks!

Good story so far

:)

Aww

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