That's it? Oh come on you have to finish this!

YOU IDJIT HOTCH

I would of really loved to have seen this on tv as the scene where hotch goes up to Emily and her date would be so hilarious and also quite heart wrenching. The sequel to this is also hilarious

Oh my God your rant at the beginning was funny crazy good... and that was before I even got to the story...TONIGHT IS THE BEAUTIFUL NIGHT! AN HOUR AND A HALF LEFT AND I CANNOT EXPRESS HOW FUCKING EXCITED I AM! IF THERE ARE NO HOTCH/PRENTISS MOMENTS I WILL KILL SOMEONE! LITERALLY CUT A BITCH THEN TORCH A BUILDING FULL OF PUPPIES! - Priceless

Now on to my review of the story itself because if I don't I would go on and on about the other hahaha...
LOL Moment...Great, Hotch thought, perfect date area with perfect food with a man who has perfect hair... I love Hotch's hair no way the other mans hair looked better ;)

"Stalk much?" Emily asked when she realized he wasn't going to answer her.

Finally his mind came back to him. "I'm not stalking you," Hotch protested.

"Oh really? You followed me from work to this restaurant. You went inside and stood in the corner like a creeper and you followed me into the bathroom, if that's not stalking, I'm not sure I understand the definition." ...GREAT LINES :)

this had me in tears laughing so hard ..."Emily?" Hotch asked in surprise.

She looked over at him and before she could question what he wanted he went all in.

"Who is this?" Hotch demanded. "Is this the movies with the girls? Do you do this often? Lie to me and go out on dates when I'm at home watching our children? So who is this?" he looked over at the man and glared. "Do you plan on fucking him? Am I not good enough for you anymore?"

Emily couldn't believe what she was hearing and she had to quickly snap her mouth shut when she realized it was hanging open.

"Who is this guy?" her date asked.

"I'm her husband," Hotch answered with anger lacing his tone.

"You're married?" he asked as his eyes clouded with sadness.

Oh my god I should just copy and post the whole thing n this was just absolutely awesome but the end was sad now I am off to read the sequel... Great job!

great story getting ready to read the sequel

you did a great job on this story... love it...

Good job so what happened about the puppies since there wasn't an hp scene although I was actually kinda happy cuz they stood closer then they did last season exchanged glances shared a phone call and the look he gave her like he wanted to protect her when he left her to face the senate

Italian dinner $60... The look on Emily's face... Priceless!

great make him suffer alot more really like drama

So there's going to be a follow up chapter, right? Please? And I hope you really didn't cut someone up or burnt some puppies. I am SOOOOO needing some H/P scenes it's not funny. Great job, loved the whole 'I am her husband and she's cheating on me' speech, awesome!

Poor Hotch, he was just doing what he thought was the right thing to do. You should either do another chapter or a sequel. And the season premere was amazing! All 7 back together!

Gosh! Why wait till Monday? Go to her place and lay it all out!

Doh!

seriously, that man needs to really come out of his shell!

Go for it or you'd really lose her, you big dumb jerk!

okay...i vented my spleen...oh I like it! so cute! Hotch a stalker! Ha!

thank you!

Lizzie

Hahha great job!

you can't leave us hanging! this story needs more chapters.

do a sequel it was good.