BTW technically there's a fault. shikamaru first asked temari out on a date when he was 19

This was pretty good and I normally don't think like that when it comes to a lemon

Awsome!

I like the description! I also like it that you dont dive into the Lemon part right away.

Dats it, wat about the sexing u can do better

Really good! You captured Shikamaru and the others PERFECTLY in a beautiful style of writing. Pretty good lemon too. I'm adding it to my lemonade of on of my fav couples, ShikaTema. Bye!

This was so great, sad that it was short. Loved. It. Anyway. :D

great story

best birthday sex ever

hmmm 17's a good age to turn and get that sort of surprise

Happy Birthday to you, Happy Birthday to you, Happy birthday dead Shikamaru, Temari loves you!

hhnnnNNNGGGG

Very good storyline and excellent description of the scene! You also made a very good follow-up description of their personalities from the origins! Please make more as I really enjoy it!

..best birthday ever? I think so! ;) Lol

Great job!

Yes! That was perfect! ShikaTema has to be my third favorite Naruto pairing ever, it's just so obvious they want each other! And the idea of her saving herself for his birthday is both incredibly romantic and incredibly sexy. I don't know what's better; the lemon or the fluff! XD

In essence, this was a very well written one-shot, and I enjoyed every word of it. :D P.S. THIS NEEDS WAAAY MORE REVIEWS, CHA!

that was awesome!