Are you going to update soon, because this is a pretty good story and I wish to read some more

It's okay, but the numbers scattered around it with all the footnotes is quite annoying.

Very funny.

This is hilarious. Reminiscent of Terry Pratchett.

Great, awesome, hilarious. Really amazing too.

Instead of doing numbers, write parentheses or include your comments in the body of text. It frustrates to scroll upp and down.

Typos galore, but the story makes it all worth it!

Please, tell me you accidentally put 'Complete'? This cannot be the end, you hear me!

This made my day, please keep going!

HOW THE HECK IS THIS LABELLED "COMPLETE".

IT IS NOT COMPLETE.

Oh, great, now my brain is HELPFULLY providing me the 1265485123 scenarios this fic can continue to...

Please write more? pretty please?

This is me while reading the story: quiet, concentrating fully on story.

This is me a half second after finishing: Look of concentration abruptly changes to hysterical and I'm rolling on the floor laughing

Rating of story: Absolutly hilarious and awesome.

Thanks for writing this, I love it!

-BreeilnaBane

Oh my GOD I was laughing SO HARD (especially at the footnotes) and GODDAMMIT MY THROAT HURTS ANYWAY now it hurts EVEN MORE.

But that was SO TOTALLY WORTH IT.

love it! please update soon!

I love this story, its SO funny to read all the comments in the footnotes! I'm looking forward to the next chapter! I also have a question, have you ever read the 'bartimaeus trilogy' by jonathan stroud? Because it uses footnotes the same way your story does and it's just as funny to read :)

Confession: I didn't read the footnotes, because that's way to much scrolling up and down and frankly there were too many of them.

I mightily enjoyed the story though. Can't wait to see what happens next!

Loved this and loved the footnotes (very Pratchett-like)! Please continue! The pairing and your writing are comedy gold, and I love your Tony voice. Your Loki voice from the prior fic in the series is also quite good, but you've got Tony nailed.

(I would only make one suggestion - due to ff.n formatting, try setting off the numbers in the body of the text with parentheses or dashes, like (3) or -3-, to make them easier to pick out of the text)