This is a fascinating look at Haymitch! I love the idea of Hazelle learning more about Haymitch as she tries to clean his house. It really gives her such insight into how much Haymitch has suffered. I would love to read more!

Great work!

Ani-maniac494

I love this story and I really wish you'd continue it. It's beautifully written and you write the characters very well. Haymitch is so sweet at the end, and I really like reading about Hazelle. :) Please update!

Oh, hey! I didn't know this updated. I like where you are taking the story, even though it's only two chapters in. You should continue. :)

I have to say this chapter has a ton of sweet in it - It felt so vulnerable when he asked if she believed him - and kindly taking the bag of coins - and telling her not to do it all at once - so sugery -awwwwwwww!

Love it! 3 :)

This is awesome! I love it!

A few typos and towards the end, some problems with dialogue. But really, I love the bit about the picture. (THAT'S OUR MOLLY… SORT OF ;D)

Thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you!

So sad. The story you told about Haymitch was so wonderfully dramatic. And the rose thing sounded familiar. Nice work. Keep it up!

great story

update soon please

Thank you all so much for the feedback! Chapter 2 is up, I hope you enjoy it.

Oh my gosh! That was so good. I really love this story, and I can't wait to read more.

This story shocked me by how suprisingly good it was. You are clearly a talented writer and I anticipate the next chapter of this fic. I really do hope you continue on with this, I will chck for updates!

Oh this is really sweet - please keep going - can't wait for more