I absolutely love your story. I love the way you write, it’s inspirational. Especially how poetic you write.

I’m re-reading this ans I realized how much I want Ray/Alice/Jasper to become a thing

I love this fic. It is the best Twilight fanfic I've ever read.

i hope mc gets changed into a vampire soon. even should it be just for shits and giggles(to avoid the volturi). great start. finally a reasonable thing with the integration of a mc and his forknowledge into a ff.

This story is incredibly written. Your character Mir is fantastic, definitely one of the better Twilight OCs out there. That being said, I was really looking for an Edward/OC story, and you haven't declared the pairings yet. I checked the sequel, and you haven't declared it there yet either, and even after 22 chapters, Bella still hasn't even made an appearance. As much as I'm enjoying the story so far, I'm hesitant to continue putting in the time to keep reading only to find out this is a Bella/Edward pairing in the end, with Mir ending up with another character. So far, Edward and Mir seem very much like siblings, which I do find a bit strange on Edward's part since Mir is so well matched for him. I would have expected him to at least consider it, yet he doesn't seem to at all. Even knowing about the future possibility with Bella, I would assume Edward would question whether or not he would be happy with Mir, or at least develop an attraction at the least if this was going to end up with Edward and Mir together. This makes me think that this will not end up with Edward and Mir, even if they come to care for each other over time. Edward fell in love with Bella very quickly. Even if he fell in love with Mir at a slower pace, there's still the matter of attraction.

I also wanted to mention how much I love the insert about how Jacob basically railroaded Bella's experience as a new mother. I always hated that he did that, and that Bella let it happen. Bella was the first one to love and fight for her baby, and every instinct she had was wired to protect and care for her child, and there Jacob is literally trying to rip Renesmee out of her hands. Bella was a very weak character, and Jacob was awful. Edward would be so much happier with Mir. I hope this ends up with them together.

I'm guessing Edward x Ray won't be a thing? :(

This story is beautiful. You are an extremely talented and empathetic writer. Very pleased to have found this story. Thank you.

This is so good that you've sucked me in from the first chapter. I love Mirelle and I would like to see some Edward PoV but Mirelle is turning out to be a treat as long as she doesn't become a mary sue like Bella.

I wonder why people dislike/hate Jacob Black so much. I mean, i get that Jake is impulsive and idiotic but he's just a teenager, typical for a teenage boy while Edward is a century years old so that makes him the wise and logical man.

That was beautiful!

I adored this story!
Thank you so much for Mir and her story.

I just re read this story and it holds up beautifully

Since when do you call the cops wheb a student doesn't help another student clean up? That is ebtirely unbelievable.

Vanessa loses it and attacks Mir in a public place. Angela shows up to be the witness, call the police, make a commotion. Mir sends her away. This was the perfect opportunity to catch Vanessa. Even a weapon with Mir's blood to become proof. How does Mir expect Vanessa tilo pay for her actions abd stop getting the chance to hurt people if she just lets her get away with everything?

Why couldn't she say she saw/heard the girl. Why didn't she say she recognized her assailants from the dance? It just makes no sense.