| Reviews for I'm His Daughter I'm His Demise |
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  Guest chapter 5 . 11/5/2019 This had a very promising plot. Unfortunately storyline is inconsistent and defies reason. |
| eria chapter 11 . 7/21/2019 It lacks consistency and the story has a few holes. Even the character development is suffering. Sorry, I can't read it anymore |
 madxmaddie chapter 21 . 7/15/2019 Honestly I don’t see the point of the end of this chapter. It’s supposed to be a secret. They don’t know how to protect their minds or anything. They aren’t part of the order or shown to be extremely close friends just housemates so why would Dumbledore risk that? It doesn’t go with canon or you’re story to be honest. If you went outside of canon and made them more important to your story and the order ok but you didn’t so Sorry but I don’t see the point of that to be honest. Other than that I do like how you twist cannon to happen how you want to at different times for your story. |
| madxmaddie chapter 12 . 7/12/2019 you suddenly switched from abby's POV to sev |
| Guest chapter 51 . 5/24/2018 I thought he already killed Fudge. Do you mean Scrimgour? |
| Phoenixica24 chapter 54 . 7/16/2015 I'm so glad I finally got around to coming back and finishing this story. It was a beautiful story all the way through, and you really did the ending justice. This will definitely remain a favorite! |
| bboops20 chapter 22 . 6/15/2015 poor hermiome |
| bboops20 chapter 21 . 6/15/2015 poor abbie allways qustions |
| bboops20 chapter 18 . 6/15/2015 i love abbie and sevs tender moment |
| bboops20 chapter 17 . 6/15/2015 poor abbie |
| bboops20 chapter 16 . 6/15/2015 brill chap candy floss heeee heee like it |
| bboops20 chapter 15 . 6/14/2015 poor abbie |
| bboops20 chapter 14 . 6/14/2015 POOR ABBIE AND It ONLY THE BEGINNING |
| bboops20 chapter 13 . 6/14/2015 POOR ABBIE |
| bboops20 chapter 12 . 6/14/2015 I LOVE LYNX |
