Wow.

Okay, you published this a long time ago, so you might not be interested in reading reviews on it anymore. But, whatever, can't hurt to post one.

Anyways, this is really, really good. I loved the constant crazed insistence by the Riddler that he's not insane and the absolute insanity that fills the Joker's every word. You did a great job of using the punctuation in this story to really drive in how fragmented their minds are, while (somehow) still making a train of thought clear enough to follow along with. My personal favorite was the Joker's take on each member of young justice, highlighting his amusement with most of the group, his jealousy of the flashes, and his deranged obsession with Robin. I doubt you'll be interested in posting another chapter, but you did a great job with this!

well that was delightfully terrifying

You are scary good at writing a mentality unstable criminal. I had chills

I think this is the best Joker POV I've ever read. But now I've got his voice stuck in my head. That should probably be a cause of concern. But it's also kind of sort of funny. Tehehe...

knock, knock
.
he's not mad
.
knock, knock
.
He's not mad.
.
knockknock
.
He's definitely not mad.
.
knockknockknock
.
Because being mad doesn't make /any/ sense, or /non/-sense, and he's not that, no no no, he's definitely not that. He's not mad.
.
knockknockknOCK
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He's not mad. He is not maD. Okay? He's not mad. OKAY? He iS NOt mAD!
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KNOckknOCkKnOCkkNOCKKNOCK
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Silence. (He's not mad) And then,
.
who's there
.
And fine, maybe he is a little mad. Just a little mad but not mad-mad he's just a little mad and it makes sense, it makes sense, okAY? Because it makes sense and /he's not mad/.
.
not mad

I was laughing-
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hehe
.
-really, I was,-
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hehehe
.
for who could not?
.
After all,
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heeheehee
.
it was just so-
.
teeheeheehee
.
funny
.
heeehahAHAHA

:)))

Oh my GOD that was brilliant

And /that/, all of that and the one before, is Exactly and Entirely why Bats Does Not Want the baby heroes out in full view (thus the 'covert'), /especially/ in Gotham and unsupervised.

because /oh hell no/.

Your style of writing insanity is brilliant! I love it! And of course it's insanity because he's not mad right, not mad at all. HehehahaHAHAHAHAHA

(This was kind of scary)

Wow, I think I just went a little crazy just reading this. You write insanity so well! :D I especially like Riddler's THAT was beautiful.

Mad? No, mad is an understatement.

GIVE ME MORE.

Very creepy in an awesome way. This is a great idea for a series-please update!

she's stubborn, is all, a Gothamite but a hothead (and he can use that) but with a glass jaw so fragile, broken with a butterfly's touch…

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but you know who he does like he likes his little birdboy, his own precious little faux-child. It's almost as if he's helping raise the boy as well; the kid's so bright and cheerful, and has such a good laugh, you know, such a good laugh and he can work with that, can work with

the boy is stained with Gotham and ruined by honor, but not broken, not useless, and it's his own little game—he doesn't want a sidekick (that's what he's got Harley for)— he wants his bird, is all, a little bird to care for and dwell on and make laugh and break the wings and pluck the feathers out of, and show him the bright side of life where everything is just so—

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Beautiful. Just beautiful. Your descriptions are perfect. Artemis-that was amazing. You (Joker) described her just...wow. You really captured her essence, I think.

Robin's bit is lovely. I especially like how Joker feels like Robin is his a little bit, like he's helped raise him and he wants Robin on his side-and not just as a sidekick. I really liked that. 3 You're style is fluid and wonderful and enchanting. Keep it up.