Reviews for Chaos Theory |
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Guest chapter 15 . 7/5 Bro shoulda made the fight more exciting why he making everything seem so effortless. takes the fun out of things bro |
Callum Runchman chapter 36 . 6/16 I don't get why this was forgotten. It was a decent story and despite what you said about percabeth not making sense in the story I think it would have been a good finish for them and the happy ending they deserved. It wasn't their fault they got manipulated and this story would have been very good if it was finished |
Guest chapter 2 . 6/3 This would be amazing but the sentence structure is terrible, did you honestly think that the sentence structure was even ok when you wrote this? |
CatLuver chapter 2 . 4/19 ? *frowns* wut is this? |
FriggleBerry chapter 3 . 3/20 Yeah nope the grammar and sentence structure are trash cool story but needs work to be worth reading |
FriggleBerry chapter 2 . 3/20 If the sentences don’t stop running across paragraphs it’s gonna kill this story. It makes it impossible to read fluidly |
Paramonidos chapter 29 . 11/3/2019 Mimon isn't the opposite. Damaeson is. He's peaceful and Ares is bloodthirsty. Logically speaking, the Gigante are the opposite of the Gods' main 'aspect', or somewhere like that. Poseidon is calm and Polythemus is just arrogant. |
AllIdiotsMustDie chapter 1 . 8/21/2018 I like it so far. It has a clear storyline to it. It's interesting. It just needs editing, like where has your capitals gone? |
Guest chapter 36 . 3/27/2018 It is amazing please continue i love it |
Guest chapter 36 . 2/4/2018 Add perzoe Percy and Zoe pls add more it’s so good |
Guest chapter 30 . 2/4/2018 Awsome story it’s so awsome you should make more when u finish like where did Percy go who he got married to had kids maybe he even died even know that would be |
NightScre chapter 2 . 11/17/2017 My real name is Xander but its spelled with a z -Zander |
Percy Jackson's Spy chapter 3 . 10/14/2017 Hullo Iapetus died in the house of hades spoiler for those who hadnt read. Percy named Iapetus Bob when Percy kick Iapetus in the Lethe River |
Guest chapter 36 . 9/29/2017 Nic |