Loved the story! Awesome job!

The premise of the story is good but the way you write is riddled with misspellings and words being used either incorrectly or awkwardly. Your major edits would definitely help.

Hi this is my second time reading your story in a few years . I don’t normally say anything but I just had to leave a review. Just love how you slowly develop the chemistry between the characters. They’re amazing. Your amazing. I just love you for this

Hello from France !
It's the middle of the story but anyway... Wanted to Say that the scene between Naruto ans Sasuke was sooooo hot ! And I love so much your story 3
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This is absolutely adorable, a side of buttsex is nice too

Oh shit...

HAHAHAHAHAHHA i love to see sasuke struggling its all so good

aaah, poor Neji...

Todo estaba excelente hasta que metiste la relacion de Neji y Sasuke ya me desilusione, pero bueno gracias igual

Absolutely LOVED this story. Omg. I want to read kiba and negis story, but its not complete and feel like i would go insane catching up and having to wait for updates . I read naruto and Sasukes story in like 2 days, even while working two jobs and being sick LOL

This is such a great story! The slow romantic build up was definitely worth it. Loved the tension with Neji courting Naruto too.

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This was really cute! loved narutos little brother and was suprised that Gaara is Sasukes son here xD but I could totally picture them xD great story!

When the title of the book is called 'determination', it fills you with determination to finish the book.

Thank you for creating such an awesome story. It wa great read and I respect that you tak relationships slow. Love it