Mm-mm-mm, GrimmIchi. Please and thank you!

yo ! have you posted the continuation ? : )

I was itching for a baby. But it's OK

Please continue

FAN!

Bad Grimmjow! Ichi is gonna be soo mad at you!

i love hen you fuck up in writing at just the right time sometimes

*dies from blood loss after marathon reading fanfics*

If it is possible please make a second fic based on this. This was just plain awesome!

Their relationship is especially cute in this one, you're obviously one of my favorite authors, as I'm sure you've noticed recently, and I love most of your Grimmichi fics, but this one seems different to me. I feel like your ventured out of your comfort zone some in this story, and you did it well. Though it definitely still has your touch in it xD
And Chapter10, Ichigo : ""… I don't know… I thought it ended well,"" Yes. I did as well. *joins Rukia with a massive nosebleed*
Also, one of the things I find most authors have the most trouble with, is mentioning/being specific with problems and emotions arising within a character when a problem occurs that the reader can sense, but then is lead to think the character doesn't feel because it isn't mentioned. I know I put it awkwardly, but a good example of this is in Chapter 15 when Ichi mentions not being good enough to be loved. Other authors might have just left that to the reader to feel, and I hate it when they do that. The little things like so really make me appreciate the time and thought put into the story.
And there's a continuation right? *pretty sure I undertood that much, and will go look for it in 5 seconds, I can't wait to see how things turn out :3

SHUUHEI! YOU DUMBASS! You JUST realized this!

Hi! Love your stories! They're the best! XD
I totally agree that Shuuhei is HOT! And I really would like a threesome.
Do you mind writing one? /

Hm...is it just me or does your writing seem so different then again, it could just be me but reading this and comparing your other stories that you wrote it seems what you wrote, actually I mean "typed" is very different in this story and the other ones before this. How long ago was this? :/

I'm liking the storyline but your typing just seems to bother me for some reason and I'm not sure why...maybe, I'm just weird. XD

Damn and I thought this was leading to a threesome lol. XD

Yea, Grimmjow wouldn't like to share his submissive and this is pretty interesting and I hope they stop Kai already so they can go home. :(

I like that Grimmjow is making Ichi feel better by "Comforting him"and all but this is just me thinking, shouldn't Ichigo have been tested if he caught some STD's from the person who raped him? :/