10 MONTHS! Update this story! I demand you to!

Update.

Sorry, forgot put the name in on the last review. Its Roseal by the way. :) your faithful reviewer! Sort of.

Okay, first of all I'm sorry I've been gone for so long. Of course I wouldn't be gone forever, I love your story to much for that. :) But on the topic of your story, things are getting pretty intense right now. This chapter left me saying "oh shit..." a couple of times. And the ending, (ugh! Cliffhanger!) Was great! Of course I love the action scenes! Although it hurts to see characters I love perish, it makes the story much more interesting! You never know who could be next... (Mawahahah!) But yeah, I'm very happy with the way these chapters came out, and I thought that you deserved to know how much of a great job your doing! Can't wait to see you on the next chapter! Keep up the great work! OuO

Giant pink face... yellow eyes... I'll think about it... I don't know D:
At first, I always thought bouncing in a bubble would be fun. This chapter changed my mind XD I especially wouldn't want to ride with Luc, him and his massive spikes. OH WAIT I KNOW NOW! Chirp of a "playful" bird...! Dear sweet mother Hinawa, LUUUUCCAAAS! How will he make it out of this one?! DX It was a one-hit kill in the game! C'mon Lucario, SAVE. HIM!

Well, there goes Mario :l And possibly Bowser, too. THEY FREAKIN DESERVED IT! Link, Ness, and Lucario are so loyal! Man I would love to have friends like them. Lucas is super lucky! I've been waiting for a while, but I believe it was worth it! :D I hope Claus reappears in this. He's too awesome to be gone just like that in chapter 4, but I understand that it made more progress in the story. Great job :)

Please update soon. It's really good

Can't wait for next chapter!

I can't wait for the next chapter, this is my favourite SSBB/Mother fanfic 3

Wow... This is one of the best fanfictions I've read, by far. Did you move this to the Smash Bros section? I thought I saw this is the Earthbound one.

Anyway, very creative, very well written. There are close to no grammar/spelling mistakes. This was well done so far. Keep updating.

...poor guy, been through enough already. *click tongue* Tsk, tsk tsk. I wonder when will Claus come to. I've missed him already.

OHHH NOOOEESSSS! YOU KILLED MARTH!? Your killing my feels! ヽ ;;ﾉ WHY would you do this to me? To him!?
AS much as I love Marth though, I have to say, You went past my expectations for this chapter! I was very excited for this chapter, and you completly satified that excitment! Thank you! :o)

My reaction to this chapter was just a high pitched squeal that lasted for about half a minute. Now in just really hyped up for the next chapter.

Well a chapter, and i finally read it. all i can say is the wording seems stiff, pretty often. besides that its fine and suspenseful

yaay good chapter :D