And what a story. And to be honest I think also that's the worst that can happen to John if Moriarty had really wanted to hurt Sherlock. At least the show would have had a few more episodes. Anyway thank you for sharing.

I'm a bit surprise of not seeing Mrs Hudson that often. I mean she's a bit of a mother-hen. And where is she ?

One word. Whoah.

I ABSOLUTELY CANNOT EXPLAIN MY LOVE FOR THIS STORY. Ahem. So yes, I did thoroughly enjoy this beautiful story! Eeshshshsh. I am starting the next one as soon as I finish this review!
Wonderful story!

Lady you have pulled my heart string one way and the other. I have cringed,cryed,cursed,cryed some more. I have had a lump in my throat that just would not go away. I have dreaded reading the next line ...but couldn't bring myself not to. Your story has been spot on. I am waiting...not patiently...for the next story in this trilogy. Please don't wait too long. Hope the new year is a great one for you

OH Dear God! I have never had my heart ripped to shreds by story! You successfully have me crying on my couch! I can picture every bit of this and it is devastating! Especially a few chapters back with Moran breaking Johns ribs. I swear I was physically going to be sick! Well done! I have covered the full range of emotions with this story!

I know this was posted 5 years ago, but this is an amazing chapter. John's chapter literally had me in tears. Well done. X

Some of the story was a bit slow or it seemed to ramble a bit with unnecessary details and there's minor grammar/spelling errors, but overall, well done.

Just have to say that I love your story so far, and I'm excited to find out what happens as I keep reading. I especially loved the cute little embedded Unilock! It was a great way to add some cuteness in amongst all of the angst! :) Thanks for writing!

No offense, but I feel like this story would be better rated M for safety. Keep up the great work!

wow. your johnlock story left me stunned, heart racing, and aching to read more. it left me speechless at times, and made my eyes water at points. this story felt as real as my heartbeat, and I loved it. it is one of the best fanfics that I've read, and trust me, I've read a LOT of them. I cant say enough that I loved this story, every last word.

Oh bloody ubiverse it is so emotional and absolutel T. Our beloved characters perform at their best. Their match is unique. Sherlock's affectionate side is so well embraces to his whole personality. John is a godamn lucky lucky man and so is is Sherlock though.
Lestrade's performance amazing too. And so Anderson's and Donovan 's (thanks to your masterpiece I started to like her xp). Ms Hudson adorable as always..
And Mycroft.. any comment is redundant. Protective caring and Sherlock's always back up.
Moriarty and his minions perfectly located as the badasrses to the scenery.
And the addition of the nurse and John's sister is accurate.

I liked the language. You are really a prolific writer with fertile to maginational skills..

Thank you for updating This.

It is amazing.

Holy freaking glory! That was a fantastic read. I would tilt my head to you if I was wearing one. Going to read the rest but as my heart is broken, it ain't gonna happen tonight. I love Sherlock's solution for Moran. Perfect.

Your talents are wasted in fanfiction, my dear, go write a book! And get a movie made out of it!