At the time this took place on the show Maura lived in Beacon Hill Not Brookline

I adored your story! Thank you!

omg! thats so sweet and ssssoooooo hooooot!

I just found out an interesting thing a few weeks ago about the actor that played Ian. He's not actually Australian but English :o

What would happen if MAURA and JACK were just about to move to the
bedroom when IAN arrives on the doorstep?

Really enjoyed this story too. They're just so good together!

I love your banter and the thoughts that go thru their heads. Well done. I wish I had found these years ago.

I'm watching this episode right now, and I like the way you did it with jane being over-protective at the crime scene, and then what happened at Maura's house. I'm glad she and Tommy are ok, and that Jane was there for her. I also this thst Jane's protectiveness at the crime scene is definitely how the writers should have gone; it was much more realistic to see Jane send her off, with very strict orders, to go back to the station, no stops along the way whatsoever. Great story so far; I think you are a great writer! :)

This chapter is really hard to read. All the paragraphs need splitting up, they are too hard to read

Too much angst, couldn't get further than halfway. Sorry.

Thanks for writing and posting. One of my new favorites. So sweet and lovely.

Absolutely loved this story.
Thanks so much

Bit wordy & an awful lot of inner processing in this one.
Remember the old adage: show don't tell...

Such a well told story!

Loved it! Kept me on the edge of my seat. Made that episode soooo much better! Great story!