Now I normally don't comment on M rated fanfics but you uh. made the moronic dork Wheatley into his Insane Evil side. I like dominant Wheatley. Unfortunately Valve won't. Make a portal 3 but can you write an M rated fanfic for my oc Gladys Johnson

You naughty little girl GLaDOS.

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four words. THIS. NEEDS. MORE. REVIEWS. okay, ima just make a list here.
1) your writing style- love it. totally bloody brilliant omg I can't even express my feels right now
2) your ability to stick to character is AMAZING. do you even know how unbelievably perf you are?! HDIDFJJFBD. GLaDOS- fantastic, all her reactions, oh MY GLOB. and Wheatley- dear lord don't even get me started. Know what it reminded me of? That part in the game when wheets is all "You're going to love it, to death.." and I was like o/o oh. and then he ruins it by being a dork. lol but yeah, I could totes hear his voice in my head and I'm like "hhhhnnnnnnnnnn" XD
3) YOU. You are a perfect human being. do you even know how bloody HARD it is to find a good WheatDOS fic?! TOO HARD. D: but you just made my entire week, month, and year with this. well maybe not that much, (lol) but you get my point. I love you.
4) DO YOU HAVE A TUMBLR?!
5) when and where would you like to get married?
6) btw, as far as the story plot goes, beautiful. I can kinda-sorta see it happening. but we all know valve isn't kind enough to make our dreams cannon. hahaha
to conclude, you are a perfect human being, you're an amazing writer, and now im going to read your sequel. holy. craps man. BRIDBFFJEKFHFISJFBFIFJEIDFJE JELWFJSOQLEHHCHEK

D'awww, molestation of insane AI by brit-uh moron AI blossoms into love. An adorable lemon. You should write more often!

Yay, WheatleyxGLaDOS! So far, there has been a sad lack of this pairing. Thank you -

This is juicy! :D

that was so nicely done :') GLaDOS is a bit ooc but its okay :) i loved it anyways !

Whoa! That was hot! I envy your ability to write smut.

One thing, you got the capitalization on GLaDOS' name wrong. It's a minor mistake really.

I always knew she was into that sort of thing...

Oooh! Yes! I've been waiting for a WheatDOS Fic like this! I want more! 33

:D

Might be better if you posted the whole thing at once, but it's your story!

Love,

OP from LJ

Burn her house down! lol

Nice start, please update soon. :)