tragically beautiful. a haunting piece of writing, one of those only able to be written by skilled authors. thank you for writing this, I appreciate it.

That was both sad and beautiful, thanks for sharing!

Awwwwww

this was utterly beautiful! I always felt this would be hermione's attitude to the war... as is so often the case for true survivors of atrocity, and I loved your portrayal of Tom. You get the sense of their relationship, even through this brief interaction, and that takes talent.

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Very nice

sad and beautiful

Aaawwww so sweet

I don't know why but this seems so sad. Well, bittersweet, i guess is the term. I love the style in which this was written. Good job!

I love this. This is the sweetest thing I have ever read, and your writing is wonderful. Truly amazing. Thank you so much.

I can't even... There are no words to describe how beautiful this is/how much I love this - thank you for a wonderful story :) Please write more about them!

So beautiful I wish I had more words to describe your beautiful haunting story...

Wow, have you ever published? Please, please do so, the quality of your writing is amazing! Every time I read your writing, I seem to find a new perspective on life. I'm sorry, I don't know how to return a gift of the same quality. Please continue writing and I thank you for posting this.

...haunting and sweet...

This is beautiful. Your writing is lovely and poetic in a way. It would be fantastic if you made just one or two more of these. I fell in love with a 2000 word story.