NO! NO it was going so well with the talking and the emotions and then you RUINED IT. Really?! John suddenly makes out with him in the middle of his anger and hurt? THAT DOES NOT HAPPEN IN REAL LIFE WTF

No orgasms. W.T.F.?

good fighting between the two and a good dollop of angst...nicely done especially with Sherlock's hurtful words and then with John's near calling him a freak.

..if this was true i could weep...thank you for sharing this...now we just need Gratiss to approve the script )

Good one-shot. )

I haven't seen a true fight scene between these two when both don't relatively quickly resolve their problems. Thanks for writing this! :)

Ahhhh! That was lovely! And despite it being written in the present tense which I usually HATE I really, thoroughly enjoyed it. I'm so glad John and Sherlock got something worked out, they deserve and need each other so much! :D

Love the sex bit especially. Though I was disappointed when we didn't get a full description...

I am such a perverted fangirl.

The actual hurt/comfort part was very well written. You captured their personalities beautifully.

This was really good. Very angsty. I just loved how John described so well what Sherlock did wrong. And how Sherlock, seemed to be trying so hard to understand.

Very sweet story.

This was beautiful! Really well written, and in my opinion, perfectly characterised. I loved every word, well done.

~ Lana.