2013 and this little story is still a classic! Thanks for keeping it around!

I can't believe this story is on . I remember reading it WAY back in the day on Temple o Trunks, like religiously. I think it's what got me so heavily into fan fiction.

I like, decided out of the blue today when I was talking to a friend of mine to see if this story still existed somewhere to reread it for old time sakes. The little kid in me jumped for joy seeing that this still was around.

AH! I've been looking for this everywhere. Thank you for putting it back up. I always read and re-read it when I was younger but all the pages I printed kind of fell apart. YAY! I can finally print it again. Thank you so much!

~from a huge fan

OMG! I love this story and have been looking for it forever! Im totally ecstatic right now! I remember reading it back when it was on ! I was like 10 or 11 and i printed CC1 & CC2 and i swear i must've read them everyday and night. My friends loved it too. You are like my hero. :) :) :)

Ahh, I like the old one better. Writing that's quicker to the point sparks interest in the reader more. Natalie's best friend being blonde with brown eyes isn't important to the plot, but simply saying she's blonde does in nicely. let the reader improvise. Writing is ment to inspirer thought and imagination in the reader. If you give them too much information, they'll feel overwelmed and will not like the story. Saying he had blue eyes and was "about her age" is both dropping us a hint who he is and how old Natalie is compared to Trunks. Very good. You did this in your OS version. You also said he was "about It's interesting how you think he's "about six feet tall to be precise." There's nothing precise about the word "about." v; Goku is taller than Trunks (future and present), and Goku, according to Daizenshuu (after calculating the equivalent of the centimeters into inches) is 67 inches tall. That's right! Goku's only 5'7" baby, with makes VEGETA REALLY SHORT! *ahem* I mean, Trunks less than 6'. I know you didn't know this, and I didn't know this for a long time, so I, too, thought they were taller than that (I'm rambling. I'm sorry. -_-;), but it is SHOCKING (THAT VEGETA IS SO SHORT~!) to find out a character isn't the height you thought they would be, and when an author sets a fact, instead of an "about," it throws the reader for a loop and sort of "damaged" the reading experience. Thank you for bothering to read this rant/review. I'm Alex Trebek, and you should be ashamed of yourselves! (XD)

well, this brings back memories of DWZ.

YAY!

I love this story!

I fisrst found it on and when they went down I was wanting to find your story!

By the way is there gonna be a Cosmic Crisis 4?

eek! i cant believe your story is on ! thats so cool! lol im a dork...sorry, i read ur story before on and me and my step sisters REALLY love your story, but now since you've liked changed it or whatever, imma read it again! i LOVE your writing, you're SO good! _ ja ne and keep up the GREAT work!

eek! i cant believe your story is on ! thats so cool! lol im a dork...sorry, i read ur story before on and me and my step sisters REALLY love your story, but now since you've liked changed it or whatever, imma read it again! i LOVE your writing, you're SO good! _ ja ne and keep up the GREAT work!

eek! i cant believe your story is on ! thats so cool! lol im a dork...sorry, i read ur story before on and me and my step sisters REALLY love your story, but now since you've liked changed it or whatever, imma read it again! i LOVE your writing, you're SO good! _ ja ne and keep up the GREAT work!

eek! i cant believe your story is on ! thats so cool! lol im a dork...sorry, i read ur story before on and me and my step sisters REALLY love your story, but now since you've liked changed it or whatever, imma read it again! i LOVE your writing, you're SO good! _ ja ne and keep up the GREAT work!

eek! i cant believe your story is on ! thats so cool! lol im a dork...sorry, i read ur story before on and me and my step sisters REALLY love your story, but now since you've liked changed it or whatever, imma read it again! i LOVE your writing, you're SO good! _ ja ne and keep up the GREAT work!

eek! i cant believe your story is on ! thats so cool! lol im a dork...sorry, i read ur story before on and me and my step sisters REALLY love your story, but now since you've liked changed it or whatever, imma read it again! i LOVE your writing, you're SO good! _ ja ne and keep up the GREAT work!

eek! i cant believe your story is on ! thats so cool! lol im a dork...sorry, i read ur story before on and me and my step sisters REALLY love your story, but now since you've liked changed it or whatever, imma read it again! i LOVE your writing, you're SO good! _ ja ne and keep up the GREAT work!

eek! i cant believe your story is on ! thats so cool! lol im a dork...sorry, i read ur story before on and me and my step sisters REALLY love your story, but now since you've liked changed it or whatever, imma read it again! i LOVE your writing, you're SO good! _ ja ne and keep up the GREAT work!