Reviews for A Little Left Behind |
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Orange Shine chapter 3 . 2/19/2018 Aww.. that's nice. I enjoyed the story very much. Thanks for writing this! |
Orange Shine chapter 2 . 2/19/2018 Noooo! Itachi! ... Great chapter. |
YokaiAngel chapter 3 . 1/7/2018 amazing!~~~~~~ |
Yameros chapter 3 . 8/2/2016 Beautiful plot. It's really great to find some fanfics that doesn't revolve only in shoujo genre type of life. You really captured Itachi's emotion based from the original work and it's fun reading a more mature Naruto. Good Work |
roxx1407 chapter 1 . 1/27/2015 I could have really enjoyed this if Itachi hadn't been so out of character. If anybody asks me about what it means to write something about Itachi, I would say it really is a hard task. Taking into consideration that he's probably one of the most complex characters in the whole Naruto world, writing from his perspective seems really difficult, but strangely enough I didn't have a problem with the way you portrayed him on this first chapter, the only problem, and the major problem there seems to be is that, aside from his early questions to Tsunade about Sasuke, he seems not to care a rat ass about his brother. I know that is important to stablish the main course of a story early in the chapters but rushing things is sometimes more harmfull than not. I was specting him to settle things with his brother first and then planning what to do. Also, is true that in the real story he had a certain amount of curiosity about Naruto that has a great deal of potential if you are planning for pairing them both, but you can't forget a great amount of that curiosity came to him after seeing the way his brother interacted with Naruto. This may sound rash but I'm telling you this because I really liked your writing style and I felt that if you could improve in some of the things I mentioned, you can really be more amazing than what you are now. |
Anooon chapter 3 . 1/26/2015 Awesome story! I love your writing style! |
Chikinaa chapter 3 . 11/25/2014 I'm going trough your ItaNaru stories and just ah, i love it. This one is my favorite. Now that Naruto has ended, I'm gonna bury myself in a pile of ItaNaru goodness. Your writing style is amazing and this fic particularly is something i wished would happen. Sadly, this pairing will forever be just a wish |
MattKennedy chapter 3 . 8/11/2014 Aw. Sweet ending. :) |
tigoxgirl chapter 3 . 11/26/2013 Lovely story. I had so much fun reading it! :3 |
Guest chapter 3 . 8/28/2013 That was so sweet. I always wanted Itachi to have a happy ending. |
Shining-Dreamer chapter 3 . 8/13/2013 Itachi was kind of OC, wasn't he? xD Then again... We didn't really get to know him all that well... Hm... I loooooved this story! :'D Was awesome! Thank you for finishing it! X3 |
greycat64 chapter 3 . 8/11/2013 Hurray! So happy to see that Itachi finally stopped being so self-sacrificing and got his happily-ever-after. |
Kyo Shijou chapter 3 . 8/11/2013 Me like this plot. It's so sweet and awesome and cute. But also deep on some level. I want... No! Need more! Gah! (dies of mega nosebleed and ItaNaru) |
bunnyguest chapter 3 . 8/10/2013 so glad you finished this. would have loved to see sasuke's reaction (and even kakshi's teasing or mother-hen iruka), but still a sweet ending. maybe you could do a one-shot where the village knows about the relationship and the council are panicking. |
Gih Bright chapter 3 . 8/10/2013 Sorry, but I'm too sleepy to think in English, so this review will be via translator of google chrome. This Itachi is the most beautiful thing in the world! Although it will take to beat him in a few moments! But what matters is that in the end he realized he felt for Naruto and stayed with him! And I loved the Sasuke here too! And laughs at Tsunade overloading the poor Itachi hauhauahuahauhauhauhaa And loved this fic and it going to the favorites! |