Check your grammar and punctuation

continue please.

NUUUU HE ISH DEAD! it takes the manticroe 5063 years to Re-form Idiot! HE WAS KILLED BY A GOD ONLY 3 YEARS AGO! sooooo ima do dis
Me:Hi
:hai dere
Me:*pulls out gatling gun and shoots him in face before he gets near annabeth8 HOORAH! :P

please write more

He doesn't write in 3rd person you dumb ass motherfucker

hi there Ive just read this, but there is something I think you didn't notice you've wrote this at the beginng "most of them were with Reyna but quite a lot of them were with Hazel and Frank" But according to the last book the son of Neptune hazel and frank hadn't got a chance to meet Jason so how is it possible for Jason to have a picture with them standing with him?

upadte soon please and could u tell about the battle between the monster

Yep, well I read your author's notes !

Great chapter, no not a very interesting one, but a good one none the less.

Love the Jason/Percy dynamic it's very realistic.

I noticed that it's no one is OOC ( well that's what I think. ) And I was wondering if you could check my story out ? If you you want. I'm worried that it's a bit OOC. Thanks.

POST SOON !

gREAT job

I think that you should restart it. If that is what you believe you should do, then do it. You can still use content from this story, but you can better improve it by restarting it.

I like Leo's chapter so far. You are the first fanfiction writer that actually made him funny.

OOOOH! I like it :) Update me!

the only different thing that i noticed was that octavian swore, i'd appreciate it if people didn't make anyone swear but clarrise

ohmygods. seriously? DO NOT RESTART!

thats really good! :)