I think I almost wanted to cry, thank goodness he made it

Brilliantly written, this just pulls at my heartstrings ; A;

Could picture this scenerio as part of the series ...with the duel with jake ..very emotional on your bunny ...
Thank you

Whoa... Well-written.

Barnaby's desperation really showed in this... But I'm sad to see he didn't see that blue glow. I can only imagine what his reaction would be if he did though...

Great story. Very touching

This is beautiful 3

That was...incredibly good. I want to say what I particularly liked about it, but I'm a bit stunned at the moment. I think I let out a sigh of relief at the end. I really think you captured the thoughts and feelings of someone in a time zone like that, showing how time can feel like an eternity in only a few moments.

Wow. There's not a lot of text but there doesn't really need to be in this type of life-or-death drama. I was on the edge of my seat, practically counting down the excruciating slow passage of time of the clock along with Barnaby. You held my attention -spellbound and excited- right down to the very lest sentence.

A wonderful piece of written work. Thanks for sharing.

you leave me completly speechless.

I 3 it!

Nicely done. I thought this was going to be a death fic but I'm relieved that Kotetsu made it out alive :D You set up the tension well, the ticking of the clock dispersed with Barnaby's thoughts. I enjoyed reading it.

Damn if I didn't almost start crying. Nicely written.

Its actually one of my favorite story fills.

Oh GOD! I thought Kotetsu is going to die! Thank goodness for Barnaby! A great and an exciting fic! Job well done! XD I just love it!