*happy smiles*
Thanks for the ridiculous, wretched, happy story.

I do hope you didn't kill the baby to spite the bitch.
This story is twisted, wrong and... well, somehow it fits better than the epilogue lol

Great story! Love it.

Excellent story.
Thanks for sharing.

this is the most disturbing and hilarious piece of fanfiction i have ever read. i just love it

...And all's well that ends well. One had to conclude that this can in great extent be laid at Molly's feet: in fact one of the most delusional Mollys I've ever read. Got to wonder if it's Molly's actions that caused the absence of Hermione's parents in this story.

Harry had sussed out who the prime enemy is here and his actions to suppress Molly are well thought of and appropriate. Hermione's interview with Ron amply shows that however much Hermione might have had (misplaced) love for Ron, he never really had any for her.

Loved the use of Susan Bones as their Healer and I hope she is with someone and just using her maiden name professionally. She gave them great support and then stood up to Molly. The paternity test was a great shock, sadly not enough of one as to shake Molly into rationality.

The trial and aftermath works well and kudos to Neville for his role.

Scene with the kids works well. Also the Howler and the tweak at the 'Hermione middle name controversy'. Arthur's visit was good too.

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And now the Weasley duo show why they've not been though of as the sharpest pencils in the box. Using the lust potion is plain dumb. Even had it worked on Harry, it wouldn't have legitimized the pregnancy, as it was already after she'd begun to have morning sickness. Harry would be able to testify about not having had sex with Ginny, moreover, he could also relate the elves telling him that Ginny was having morning sickness.

Harry had my earlier idea in this chapter. Pity that Hermione didn't embrace the idea, would have saved a lot of complications. One gripe, I don't think much of the gratuitous Blood Bigotry. Although, I does confirm my earlier suspicion that the two marriages can be chalked up to Molly's OBHWF fantasies.

The three (four?) reactions to the potions were perfect and anticipatable.

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Interesting start to the story, as things start out a bit AU. Most Harmonians would have liked to have seen H&H make love while Ron was AWOL, hopefully being each other's first. It does beggar the question why they ended up marrying Weasleys. One suspects Molly pressure was 90-95% of the reason.

One wonders how far back Ron and Ginny have been boinking each other. The five kids would be in the way of alibis then. The question would then be if they took precautions up to that time, why did they stop doing so?

One really good thing you've done is to have Harry and Hermione's affair be more than just sex. They have in fact rediscovered the close relationship they had had and now it's turned into love, as it probably should have in canon.

The insane marriage laws you have here are fun, but they provide another way out you don't have them take. H&H simply announce that they no longer will live with Ron or Ginny, based on the fact of their refusal to have marital relations. Adding that they have rediscovered their close friendship and that they now love the other and are living together. Granted, this will ignite a firestorm, but when Ginny finally shows, Harry can then demand a paternity test be done.

I am enough of a Harmonian to overlook the undoubted ick factor in all of this.

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este fic es un asco ay tantas cosas tan ridiculas en ella que no se por donde empezar . el recurso de harry y hermione se juntan despues de estar casados con otras personas tener hijos y despues de 22 años un dia se deciden que sus parejas son las peores marido e esposa , vamossssssss . el incesto de ron y gin es poco creíble .

Wonderful! Those are arguably the best closing lines I've read in a fanfic yet. Loved it!

LOL, this was a fun read that incorporated many cliches but in a unique way.

What a wonderful story! Absolutely loved it :)

I can almost see the "truth" of your story. Both Ron and his sister are portrayed by as self-centered individuals and this story just carries it a little further.

Nice rreading. Ha! Take that Lady Rowling, your epilogue didn't stop the affection and love :)

A far better ending than the canon one. Though you could've written that harry dies and it'd still be better. Either way, well written and keep up the good work!