Great start! I’m here after seeing this on fryrebyrd’s rec list and I can’t wait to read more

Great story. I almost didn’t read the “alternate ending” because I thought it would be bad. How wrong I was. It just made me like the story even more.

Thanks so much for sharing your writing with the rest of us. I look forward to reading more of your work.

I'm so glad someone reccomended your story it was so great I blew threw it loving it all. I know how impractical it was to bring Jasper back but so glad you threw that in there at the end. Loved it! :)

I love your first chapter of this story! Great writing with an intriguing plot. Thanks!

Wow.. fantastic story

Such a great story.

This story was rec’d by Fyrebyrd. I’m so glad I found it.

Saw this story recommended and just finished it today. I really enjoyed. The mystery, suspense, romance. All great. The ending with Jasper back to walk Bella down the aisle was fabulous. I really did like this Jasper. Thank you for sharing.

Ugh! After everything they’ve been through, why kill Jasper? The kid lived to be a punching bag human punching bag for every bully and thug he came across. Not much of a life for someone who had a gift of reading people, he worked with the worst and pined for a girl who didn’t return his feelings. What a waste.

Wow. This story might be a little too heavy for a Sunday morning read. I may need to flounce for a bit to pick up something less upsetting. Just for a bit.

Ugh! You can see the disaster from a mile away.

Thanks for the backstory. It helps to understand their co-dependency. Jasper’s idea sounds ominous.

Captivating start!

I love this ending! I hated that Jasper died!

Great story!