Reviews for A Natural |
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Ranger-of-the-shadows chapter 1 . 8/25/2018 cute. you should continue this series of one-shots. happy writing |
Golden Bearded Dragon chapter 1 . 2/12/2017 I bet you're getting tired of me reviewing all your stories, huh? ;) But this one was also just fantabulous! |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/17/2015 need more chapters! |
Pechora chapter 1 . 11/2/2014 PLEASE MAKE ANOTHER CHAPTER! I love this! |
TortoisetheStoryteller chapter 1 . 11/2/2013 Ha! I like the idea of Halt and Pauline betting on little things like that. This is an adorable drabble series. Just one thing, though. Babies' eye are usually blue for the first six months or so, then they begin to change to whatever the final color is. |
TaylorSwiftAndPercabethForever chapter 1 . 2/16/2013 This is so good! I love the betting! TS&PForever |
maddie chapter 1 . 1/4/2013 i liked that it was cute |
Birds on the Sunset chapter 1 . 10/1/2012 That was a brilliant story so well written. I had to read the last part twice though before I understood it. He he I'm so stupid. I get it now. Really funny. |
MuggleCreator chapter 1 . 6/20/2012 Paul and Ellen...and Hal. In my mind, there's a pair of twins, then him. And I haven't read all the series yet...(when it's fluff, I don't mind being spoilt)! |
Jedi Ani Unduli chapter 1 . 10/26/2011 :-D Awww... babies come around and then certain people decide to ruin the moment. LOL Cute one-shot. ~Ani |
notthesharksurlookingfor chapter 1 . 10/24/2011 Ah, Halt... He'd never survive in Las Vegas, he can't hold his ale and all he seems to do is bet with his wife... Amazing story (as always...) |
pagestravel chapter 1 . 10/24/2011 LOVE these oneshots! So sweet! |
Owltalon chapter 1 . 10/23/2011 ooh i loved this! and when i was reading the bonus i had to stop myself from laughing out loud as it is midnight where i am from right now... xD |
unknownbananna chapter 1 . 10/23/2011 Wow. That was so fluffy and totally squee-worthy. And amazingly well written - as usual. Wouldn't expect anything else from you. ) I was kinda waiting for something like this from you. Green Eyes and An Excited Letter were building up to it, and I was thrilled to see it. And I loved it. You manage to write characters so perfectly - they're always so in character it's a joy to read. You see so much OOC-ness out there, when you find a story when they're just like they would be in the books. So kudos to you! Happy fic-ing, -Christine |
Alchemist-Ranger chapter 1 . 10/23/2011 Halt wins . . . at least, according to my fanfic. cute story |