A bit of a dark ending but okay.

I hoped this happened to your family. But then again, I do love pumping my cum in your mother. I guess she was hoping I'd give her a better child, since you were such a massively disgusting disappointment.
i bet she regretted not aborting you.

LOOOOOL bitch

Really why did naruto and sasuke fake die like bitches.

Shitty ending

Well that was a fucked up ending and confusing Mikoto's hotter than Haruna but whatever did Sasuke know Naruto was gonna kill his mum sad really nice story though

hate the ending, feels very forced, could have been way better

Infidelity is cheating when married or in a relationship. You said that Fugaku divorced Mikoto for a 'stronger' woman, so she is currently not in a relationship or married, and at twelve, neither is Naruto. You meant 'child abuse' or 'statutory rape.'

F the last part

well this was damn sexy i must say

Great story dude but the ending was horrible. He was playing with her heart... There were hundreds of ways to end this sort of story but killing her as she was was horrible.

But I do like the lemons. My problem is the end.

Best story all in all but the ending was really really really bad if only he has loved truly loved her. Dude can you do a harem type story with Mikoto and the rest of konoha?

"she asked, motherly." holy shit this is great.

Love the story not the ending

Lemon was alright, but ending was horrible

nope, mu opion is that this story waz ruined when you killed mikoto and had naruto betray her. srry buddy but that made this a story i hate.