You write beautifully. Don't take others' words to heart.

There was sex in that bed that night, just not intercourse. Interesting reactions from the parents.

Don't you think that anyone posting such stupidity should learn how to spell? It's quite obvious they can't read as the summary clearly states this is slash. As for vulgarity, they should read their own "review".

I don't understand how people can be so mean just because of a story. They are just being petty likly because they can't write anything worth while themselves so they try to put others down. If they don't like what they are reading they need to get off the story and choose a different one they have no right to put others down for what they like to write or read. I just started to read your story but so far I like it and think it is well written and unlike some fools I don't mind the pairing it is actually one of my favorites alongside severous/harry and luscious/ harry. I hope you continue because so far I am enjoying this

Why is there no mention of Tonks or Kingsley... more specifically where is Remus in all of this?

Interesting Troll that came by. They should stay under bridges where they belong. ;) You know likely they searched out stories like this. If it really bothered them, they could have just not opened the story. You did post the pairings. Thus, they are an idiot and shouldn’t be taken seriously, since obviously they have selective reading abilities. More power to you for continuing on in your endevour to write.

Damn some people do have nothing to do with their live, if that person doesn't like it why read it? I think you stories are really interesting and your way of good

I have to say I truly enjoyed every but if this story I just wish that dumbledork didn't get what he deserved for being an evil sob but at least he can't hurt them anymore. Anna

To that PM I can only reply that the person is either really jealous or really homophobic. If they didn't want to read a story that contained slash then they shouldn't have skipped over the warnings that you so clearly state in the summary. I may just be biased, but wasn't fanfiction created for writers to be able to put their own twists on stories? I sure think so.

Thank you for writing this fic, I am really enjoying it.

This story is extremely unreallistic.

I think you are an amazing author and I can't wait to see how the story builds

Great story

Forever and always. If ya don't like slash ficus and Yaois with smutt, then don't read it!. I love this story and it is getting better so, please keep writing.️️️️️️️

Don't let them get to you. I like your story and there is always going to be people who don't like the idea of doing good things and writing good stories

Just found this story while browsing, and enjoying it very much. Whoever wrote the above excerpt does not belong in fan fiction. Tolerance to ALL! There is no way you are disgracing or degrading the actors who portrayed these characters. The story is interesting
and believably written in HP universe, AU or not. Everyone differs. Now back to Allegiances.