Reviews for Stand Tall |
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ultimatequeenoffandoms chapter 1 . 4/18/2019 this is beautiful and i love it |
Gomboc123 chapter 1 . 11/28/2018 I really love this! It shows the progression of Ed's feelings so well, and it's so adorable, great fic! |
Sparkzee chapter 1 . 2/18/2018 Amazing story! But it’s Resembool, not Risenpool |
Night N. Gail chapter 1 . 4/16/2016 Aww... that was so sweet. :3 It really gets at the substance of their relationship without being unbelievably mushy or OOC. The beginning made me laugh, and I love how she comforts him at the end by reminding him that he doesn't have to face the battle alone. I envy your brevity in summarizing the key moments of their relationship. You did a good job of keeping things concise and on-track, and I think the emotion shined through better as a result. :) Grammar nitpick: "Maybe that's what love was all about." - Wouldn't that be 'Maybe that WAS what love was all about'? |
Q-A the Authoress chapter 1 . 8/29/2015 - Wonderful. Keep on Writin' and Rockin' |
CJbean chapter 1 . 1/1/2014 Well...you just about captured their entire relationship PERFECTLY. Good job as always :) |
ec-writes chapter 1 . 2/4/2013 Very sweet. I like how you explained Ed's understanding that he loved Winry. I mean, it wouldn't be Ed if it didn't happen in a clumsy/accidental fashion. He's too stubborn to simply come to the realization and accept it. |
Queen Bovine chapter 1 . 10/25/2012 When I saw the title: "Stand Tall", and that it partly took place on that "Day Before the Promised Day" scene, I really, REALLY, expected there to be a mention of Ed finally being taller than Winry. Ah, well. Good job with this one. |
ada69 chapter 1 . 9/17/2012 I liked this a lot. :) Nice little idea...Great job! ada |
Handmaiden of Awesomeness chapter 1 . 7/28/2012 This is an amazingly accurate view on how Ed feels. I really think that this would be the cannon moment and timing of when he figured it out. Very good job! :) |
jaclynkaileigh chapter 1 . 7/11/2012 More please! I will def read if you write a continuation! |
Kina Kalamari chapter 1 . 4/1/2012 That was excellent. A very interesting look into things, which I tend to enjoy. Delving into characters' heads and all that. I really like the first sentence, as well. I know that a lot of relationships can really be described as accidental, but it feels like it fits Ed's situation better than any others that I can think of. Great job. ] |
ninjas-are-everywhere chapter 1 . 1/30/2012 This is so cute! It perfectly captures how Ed feels about Winry/saving the world/life itself It's a great story |
Noble Voyager chapter 1 . 11/30/2011 That was really good. You did a great job on writing Ed's thoughts. I especially liked the conversation between Ed and Winry at the latter part of the story. It just proves how much they are meant to be and the unconditional love Winry has for Edward. Man, I used to think these two were better off as good friends before but after going back to the series, I was like, "O_O Whoa! They really are imperfectly perfect for each other!" XD Haha! Anyway, I enjoyed reading your story. I could imagine this happening in the series. :) |
Lazy Gaga chapter 1 . 10/24/2011 ah, how sweet was that? I loved it! :D |