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I liked it a lot :P

I liked this story very much. Very cute and adorable. But I have to agree with one of the reviewers that rogue would never say "ay sir." There were a few grammar mistakes throughout but not enough to misinterpret. You are welcome to continue this story but I love a happy ending :)

Please write more but change the rating to M

Thank u thank u thank u for writin this fan fic cuz i luv Xmen Evolution and imma Gambit fan and i enjoyed ur story. ;]

liked it

So an over all review: Watch your words! when your reviewing back is not black. There where a lot in chapter 2 & 3 (to avoid this read you work out loud). Also watch characters: Try to stick to your characters the best you can. Rouge would not say "ay sir." She wouldn't. Try to watch the 90s xmen its all on Mavel website (message me if you want a link) or evolution or read the comics to get better feel for your characters. Over all it was fantastic!

Ohhhh I think the end made me want a Remy again XD Over all every well a few words are wrong like lack(not lake) and Then (not thin) I won't say much I do that all the time too. Great idea I'm off to finish the other chapters.

Why is this story rated M?

Good chapter, but not long enough. Please, please post again soon.

This is good so far. Please, continue.

Excellent chapter, at least i do hope you will continue! Rogue' character is spot on, please continue, in my opinion you have a real good story in the making. As for contructive criticism all i have to say is that i spotted a couple of typos, its always good to proof read a couple of times once you have spell checked. Keep on writing! I shall be waiting with bated breath!

Other than a few spelling mistakes your work was flawless. It was amazing. You gave such intricate detail to the readers without pulling them from the story so long they'd lose interest. The story line was great, and I'd honestly love to read more from you. Keep it up!

Please update i would love to read more of it :D

Hey update