I don't know if you're still writing on here but this is very well written and I am sad to see that it is not completed. You've done a great job so far! Please finish it when you can!

Bro. This is so good. I want to know more :/

Really enjoyed these 3 chapters. Too bad it's been abandoned.

You should most definitely continue this! I love the whole Charlie-has-a-crush-on-Lily! I will be you go to support girl if need is necessary. Love this!

I'm sad this story got abandoned. It had so much potential.

This story is really, really, really good!

I hope you finish this story! It's really good. :)

Hello D

I'm from Brazil and I was looking for new James/Lily fic. Then I found yours. It's a really good one. I can't wait to read the new chapters.

Kisses from Brazil.

This is really nice! I like the premise, and it's written very well. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next.

Awww Charlie aka James Jr. sounds adorable. he has the potter curse: messy black hair, glasses, and redhead infatuation. and i have a feeling that James still has feelings for a certain redhead. and Lily just seems to have feelings for a certain glasses wearer. anyways update soon pwease

I've just been going through your Harry Potter fics and I hope you'll forgive me for not reviewing all of them, but I just wanted to say how much I'm enjoying your writing. It's so nice to see someone who is writing often for this ship. I love this fic. Poor Charlie. I look forward to seeing what happens next with James and Lily.

YAY! This story is absolutely wonderful! I'm all excited! I can't wait for you to continue! Keep up the amazing work! I've also been keeping up with Professor, so you dearest Sparkly Faerie had better keep writing because it is amazing authors like you that has me addicted to fanfiction, especially Lily and James ones! You are a truly amazing writer! Keep at it! :D

It just hit me. NO GINNYXHARRY! :o

Great chapter! I love this story! And Charlie (Potter not Weasley) is adorable! :)

Please update soon? (and no I don't think you have a problem I think it's good that you write a lot, but I think I know what you mean )

Poor Charlie, so young and having to go through something like that. This story is really good - I'm happy that is told by Lily point of view, but I hope that you will show us a chapter or two about how James feel.

IT'S ADORABLE THE LILY/CHARLIE-NESS.

We NEED more James and Lily action, okay?

GIVE ME SOME LILY/JAMES ACTION.

*takes a deep breath* but seriously, this chapter was, like always, fantastic. Really, really, really brilliant. Poor Charlie, he must be so confused. Perhaps elaborate how he must feel? I'm taking he didn't have a good relationship with his Mum, but still, it was his Mum. He also seems to be making Lily a sort of replacement for her...That's my impression anyway. You should continue with that, if that's your intention, and look at how everyone feels about that. What's James feeling, Lily and Sirius feeling? That doesn't just go unnoticed.

BRILLIANT BRILLIANT BRILLIANT!