One word. Epic.

HOLY crap...

Not even a comment about: "Oh, that's where my assignment came from, studying the 'magic of friendship'?

Ack cliffhanger, thankfully the next story is just a few clicks away. You did an excellent job on this fic, it's written exceptionally well and with such detail, needless to say it was very entertaining to read. Now then, off to start on the next one :D

wow!

I'm surprised that Rarity said yes and Fluttershy said no. I mean, she's the most compassionate pony ever, if she see a monster killing a pony and calls it misunderstood, but then calls Jer and his friends monsters. She comes off as a hypocrite.

I think Applejack has a biased apinoune

Glad to hear that starfalls daughter never hated her.

Sorry for such a sucky review. YAY there is another story coming! I was kinda worried that you'd stop or something

When Jer says "She's coming" start listening to Friendship by Sound of the Aviators.

Poor Luna. She's trying so hard to atone for what she did. I can't say I blame her for not wanting to free her friends of the past.

Awww Twilight and Celestia sitting in a tree.

LMAO Twilight

Seems like a smart plan. Of course no plan weather good or bad survives the first contact

Awwww yea Jer, getting some action tonight. You go son

Lol Bleu. Luna was a little smarter then Celestia

Good to see Rhede and Valkorn are getting a long better

Poor Bleu

That's the spirit Starfall

Epic battle. I wonder how Celestia manged to get the bone armor to go on spakler or how she had them as good as the generals

Seems like everyone is getting a long fairly well

Ok, maybe not for Star fall

Family reunion

That would be awkward. Cutting Jers head off only to regrow and come back a pissed off monster or stallion

Awww Now Rhede want's to take the blame and he's giving up his book of foals

Well at least Starfall is willing to make life a little easier for her daughter

LMAO bleu

Well Luna is now in the moon and Jer is a complete wreck

I has a sads nao

Ponyville being attacked doesn't seem like something Jer would be ok with.

At least Vecora was able to help Twilight understand.

I hope Rhede and Velkorn can get there in time

I don't blame Maw pelt for kicking them out of the family. At least Jer told them to leave to village.

I hope Jer makes the right choice

Poor Jer, he's so conflicted.

I feel bad for Rhede, he lost his whole family. Well, not his whole, he still has Jer

That was rather harsh of Luna. I think the books are controlling her

Looks like there might be a fight

Good finally the cult is dead. At least we know what set them off. Jer was right though, they were no match in a fight

That must be a seriously difficult choice they had to make just to save a lot of ponies, possibly celestia and Luna.

While I don't like spike. I understand why he's so mad. He's been left out of some of the greatest adventures and events.

I'm surprised that Jer got beaten. I suppose it kinda humbeled him. Or maybe not, who knows.

I'm even more shocked the dimond dogs would be stupid enough to test their luck against the republic. Then again, they're not known for being smart

Bleu always makes me laugh.

Lol Jer and Oroboros seem to be getting along well

LMAO bleu smash

I get the feeling that Oroboro and his ilk are trying to manpiulate Luna. They remind me of the 2-3 voices from the books,

Looks like I was right. kinda, so they're only doing it to get closer to Luna. They must know how much danger they're in they piss her off.

Poor three bear

Well that's not good, looks like jer is starting to self doubt

Things don't add up now.

Well that's not good. I wonder why Fox, Cloud dancer and wolf ran away,

Maw is right. There seems to be a lot of forboding. First from Three bear and now Maw pelt

I wonder what that book is

Well that doesn't sound to good. I wonder what Luna is up to

That is seriously messed up. Something seriously messed up is happening to Luna. like Maw Pelt and Three Bear had said, she had changed.

Luna should have been sealed up with the others

I really enjoy this story. Much better than anything I could write.

This is possibly the greatest MLP story I have ever read! It is also the longest! It has managed to take up about a week to get this far and I'm not even half way through! ...WHY DON'T U HAVE MORE REVIEWS!
I always wondered what would happen when Rarity and Pinkie returned from that place from that episode...Now I know
P.S. good thing those teddy bear things are gone, now you won't get in trouble for stealing from St-(Gets shot by Meteor Shower)

Wow, quite an intense chapter, also gave us a bit of an overview as to why they're called the Beasts of the Moon. Can't wait for more!

ChrnoKeeper

Admittedly the beginning confused me. I wasn't sure what I was reading and thought I might have missed a chapter.

Some how, you always manage to make me laugh.

Sorry for the short review, well this one and the last chapter. I've been in a rush. I'll do better next chapter

Lol poor Jer.

I can't say I blame Starfall for what she did. She did what she believed what she had to do.

I think Velkorn did what was right