Beautiful

I know this was published ages ago, but I do hope you're still reading comments, because this was just great! Sex can definitely be embarrassing and messy and all of those things that you managed to work into this story while also making it so sweet and real at the same time. Definitely one of my favorite fics. :)

That was amazing. You captured Jo and Dean in just the right way for this to happen. Kudos.

Unf. This is PERFECTION. Just so so so good. Will be reading it many times!

Awww.. And aaaah! Wow! So CUTE and so hot!

Know what? I LOVE that you made them human. With flaws. With kinks. Without the ability to go all night and themn some. Thank you!

I really enjoyed this! I'm just now watching the earlier seasons of Supernatural and I was introduced to Jo for the first time about 3 episodes ago. The chemistry between the two characters is palpable and you've done a great job of capturing that. I liked the realistically awkward "first time". I liked that you gave us the "awkward", but still kept it hot. I liked the dialogue, too. My only criticism would be the use of the present tense but everything else was so good, I stopped really noticing that after the first few minutes.

you really should write your own book, this was terrific!

This. is. GENIUS! :D Loved it!

lol I just burst out laughing wondering what would happen if Bobby walks into his living room tomorrow to find them naked and passed out on the floor.

Awesome job with this one, perfect description of a slightly less than perfect scenario lol.

"hell, likely every damn one - won't hold a candle to Joanna Beth Harvelle. And, when he closes his eyes, when he hides the person he is from her, it'll be Jo's face he sees."

What an amazing line. I loved this so much. Dean & Jo do not have perfect lives, so why should their first time be. What a great idea.

This was excellent. Your detailed descriptions kept me hanging on every word. I felt like I was right there. Makes me want him more than I did before, if that's possible ;) You're a very talented writer.

Lisa

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I thought this was beautiful! The awkwardness/non-pefect sex was not too awkward. The whole scene was sweet and really showed the caring between the characters.

I really liked this line:

Fuck. What are you thinking? This is Jo. He feels like a teenager. Sex and alcohol were not a good mix. Not when you actually gave a damn.

Thanks for the great story.

Nicely done!

Good lord that was smokin' hot! Just the right bit of awkward and uncomfortable. And still ridiculously hot! No idea how you managed to make that happen, but you absolutely did. And the end was just perfect...so lovely! You're on fire lately babe!

i know this was meant to be all "blah blah sex isnt perfect" it was still pretty damn awesome.

good job:)