Reviews for Temptations |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Logan and Carlos ever be together forever or break up? Logan get caught by Mr. Garcia and go to juvenile and others as well. |
![]() ![]() Pleaseeeee keep going I need to find put about Kames and cargan . I also need to know what his dad does when he finds out. P leaseeeeee update :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() awww this is sooo sweet! |
![]() ![]() Loved it. Will there be an update soon? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Finish the story! Please :) I want to see what will happen. |
![]() ![]() ![]() so the end was super cute! I loved Carlos "Yeah, I'm quite the catch aren't I?" haha it was so perfect! I love all your stories I can't wait for updates! |
![]() ![]() Hey, do you think you could use me in a story like that and that would be so nice if you did thx :) |
![]() ![]() WOW! that was good at the end and I think I got a boner. Anyone gay please message back! thx :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pretty please update soon I love this |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg this story is beautiful. :') I need more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() PLEASE CONTINUE! this is one of my favoriteeee Cargan stories and youre such a good writer! a great combo indeed :))) |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY! to you updating ;]. lol I can't believe this... WHAT! Carlos is the real bad boy! He is the one who is inviting Logan into his home, forcing him into kissing him... WHOA! I thought Logie is the bad boy. lol XD MAN! I love Carlos. He is sooo cute and GANGSTER-ISH! (sometime XDXDXD) No but really, I really like this story. (Why was this not on my favorite? It is NOW! lol XD.) I like the role reversal. I usually hate (and mean HATE) when the characters are sooo out of their characterization that the story just falls apart but this is perfect. It's the subtle progression of Carlos falling for Logan and Logan bending for Carlos that I love. It's not so much of Carlos becoming bad and Logan is straying from the gang world but it's them meeting halfway. It's freakin' cute. I love it Boo! lol. Logan recognizes Mr. Gracia XDXDXDXD. OOOoooOOOOOOoooo!Logan is in trouble now but have no fear, Carlos is here to save the day for a price. hehehehhehehehhehehe Carlos and Logan KISSED! I giggled and squirmed in my bed reading this part (twice!, yesterday and this morning lol) idk why but Carlos in pj and holding a bowl of cereal is too cute. It reminds me of the mom episode and Carlos was tooooo cute in that pj. Sigh, your husband does the strangest things to me. -.-' TELL HIM TO STOP IT BOO! And the ending with the kiss and the Eskimo kiss and the giggling. STOP IT! Cargan is tooo cute and it's killing me. [ I'll meet you in the afterlife Boo. This story (if not because of bad boy Carlos or worst boy Logan) stabbed me with the sharpest piece of fluffy cotton (lol XD) and I died. idk that makes sense but I died with you. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh i loved this! So glad you decided to keep writing this story! I love it. And really love the concept of Logan being a bad boy and Carlos being a goodie two shoes. Love it! Cant wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I knew it! I knew you could do it! :D Really great job, I loved it. :) |