Ooooh... More, please?

That was so sad, but an amazing story. You are such a talented writer! You always are so creative with the way you interpret the word prompt and how you can make so much happen in only a hundred words.

this was sad but i live that dean's still protecting as always!

Short and sweet! Nicely done.

NEEDS a sequel PRONTO! Way to PERFECT to be so short, there's TONS to work with! What happened later? Does John hit Sam again? Had he done it before? MORE PLEASE MORE! *I'm groveling here!*

Excellent.

That was an interesting tidbit that teenSam let out about John.

That was very good.

I liked how you portrayed it as happening without intent, I can believe this might have happened with the drink and stress of their lifestyle - and then John's instant shame for what he'd done.

Thanks for sharing!

Liked it

Oooh, this is disturbing but not unbelieveable. This is exactly how such a scene would play out.

Fine job x

Big brother willing to take on papa bear to protect baby bear. That was a bitter sweet one shot. Wonderful and insightful writing.

Rolletti

So could see this going down that way.

Poor John.

I love how you 'dictionary' the word at the start of your piece.

Unique and very cool. Sets the mood too.

Thank you,

Karen

cool use of the word and for taking a tag to that sentence Sam said!

Wow. This was uhhh-mazing. 110 words? That's crazy! In those 110 words you managed to tell an entire story! Seriously, I felt like I was in that room and had just watched this entire scene play out. You didn't even go into detail about what exactly happened but I can picture it so clearly! This was absolutely stunning! Well done!

This reads like a captured frozen breath.