This was a beautiful story! I admit, things seemed to go really fast but I liked it still :) I honestly shook my head at Fujitaka numerous times throughout the story.. But he is a father. Sigh

Hey, nice story and all, but I think characterization needs a lot of work on. First, all your characters use the use the same catch phrase, e.g. gods, and have the same expressions.. so yeah, not so individualistic (search for writer Isis' works, she's really good at characterization). I also feel that 'love' has been tossed around so soon and a bit carelessly in the story, which doesn't give much credibility to the fact.. but I'm sure a much younger reader wouldn't mind.

Sakura x Syaoran ~ Forever...
It ended alr soo sad ... Syaoran Sakura Forever~ :D

Sakura x Syaoran Forever...
Damn in these last few lines you scared me to death twice!
Phew... and about this last sentence too creep into her room like OMG... i wanted to die n not continue... dou i was sure Syaoran gonna be around but still fearz... and ofc i believe in you.. Anyways ty :D

Sakura x Syaoran Forever...
DAMN... never in my life... i felt like hitting that excuse of a father...
LOL i think he is being OC here but well i hope he comes back to his senses soon or i'll just kill him o.o
GO GO Syaoran~

This is added to my favorite stories.

What a surprise!

Loved it

Hi~i love ur story, its really nice

Superb love story, really a good writer...but u forgot to add the tomoyo marry eriol part?

This is so kAWAII I read it so many times I've lost the count

I really like your fanfic , it made me cry * wipes a tear *

AWSOME story yet again all your fanfics are great

is her mother sick?

LOVE IT Thx soooo muach for writing it D 333333