I like this, well written no mary sue. I'm getting Vampire Diaries vibes and i love it

I think its time for you to get back into writing and finish this story

This is an amazing story iam so heart broken it got abandoned

amazing cant wait till the next chapter

Aawwwwthis whole chapter was sooo good!

awwww they are hopefully going to get married
love it
i hope the council agrees to it
and i really like the devoloping relationship she has with aro
and that sweet and funny moment in the pool-thingy was amazing

awww they are reunited
that is soooo sweet
love it
and I find it awesome that she's getting close to aro as well
the garden part was really cool to read

I feel for both of them I hope Didyme can help them.

awwww poor marcus
he'S just so adorably sad
love it
can't wait to read more
i'm so glad they kissed though, even if it ended kinda badly

I'm a bit late getting into this story, but I really hope you have plans on continuing it!

Heh, why is Jane acting so weird and rude? I mean, I know she's a little brat but to Marcus? (might have been in the last chapter) He's one of the kings. She's getting a bit too cocky for her own good. She might be one of the top guard but he's still the king and NO ONE should talk to Marcus like that. Heh, look at me, getting all defensive for Marcus. :) Lovely story. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Just so you know, I grinned this entire chapter. Too cute! :D

She does deserve to be informed but I'm interested in where this is going and what plan Didyme has. I've always had this kind of small thought in the back of my mind, that Aro and Didyme are both kind of insane but while Aro is the more murderous/gonna-snap-any-second insane, Didyme is the more playful insane, like she knows what she's doing, kind of. Eh, I dunno.

I'm sorry, I haven't even finished the chapter yet, I just wanted to say that I giggled really really loud at "dying whale noises". :3

Okay, I finished the chapter now. And Aro's being kinda creepy... Hope this doesn't end the way I think it'll end. :P

Heh, it always amuses me when one of the Volturi leaders calls themselves "old man". :)