Woah. What a roller coaster ride! Loved the whole story from start to finish and what an ending! Was weeping for harry WEEPING

I liked the idea of the story but at this point this is just a written soap opera, even more so than the trilogy. You're trying too hard to make readers cry and while it may work for some, it makes other readers annoyed. I can't take you seriously, the whole drama surrounding Harry's arrest and jail time is jumping the shark, again and again...However, I applaud your skills for creating this whole universe, even though I don't like the way the story is told, it probably took a lot of effort so congrats for your commitment to write this.

Sorry but why is Voldemort even more powerful than usual? You seem to have made him a half-god or something. Throught the Darkness within the Death eaters with Voldemort got to Haogwarts but canon Voldemort had never been able to do that with Dumbeldore's protection and had to use the strange device in the room of requirements that Draco also. Even Voldemort can't break the felidius cham "can't spell it right" and if he could he wouldn't need Peter to let him throught it. You're just making Voldemort stronger than he truly is and that's annoying me so much! It was hard enough as it is and you're making it harder. The fact that Harry still hates Dumbeldore and thinks of him as a dangerous wizard also doesn't make sense.I read in a one shot of yours that he couldn't forgive him for keeping him in Hogwarts and forcing him to live in fear and discomfort in James' presence but how could he blame Dumbeldore? He didn't know about Harry's past and he had no way to know

Omg this story hit me right in the FEELS. Amazing job!

OMG I was NOT expecting that. I can’t believe that that actually happened and it fits in perfectly. I’m in shock rn. Wow. You’re an amazing writer.

Oh my god.

I can't even begin to express how amazing this story was!
When I started reading this, I thought it would be a what-if story, little did I know that this fits perfectly into your Dark Prince trilogy!

The last lines of this story were so beautiful, so artistic, that it resonated in my head for moments after I read it and I was just left in awe at how utterly perfect this was!

You are such an amazing writer. I look forward to reading your collection of one-shots and your Dark Prince rewrite.

P.S. This story made me cry harder than any story I have ever read before. I don't cry at stories often, but this... Let's just say it's hard to read through tears.

Amazing story.

Wait what

Omg I’m crying I love this story

To Gazelle, Death Eaters, and Lord FFD -
GAZELLE! I WILL M-U-R-D-E-R YOU! YOU COMPLETE IDIOT OF A GYPSIE! WHY DO YOU WANT HARRY TO BE SEPERATED FROM HIS FAMILY?! THE FAMILY THAT LOVES HIM?! UNLIKE YOUR MASTER, LORD FFD(Voldemort means flight from death, abbriviated into FFD)! YOU HATED HIM! YOU IDIOTS! I CANNOT BELIEVE YOU! YOU TOOK AN INNOCENT BOY AWAY FROM AN INNOCENT FAMILY! YOU MADE THE BOY KILL SOMEONE! YOU IDIOTS!

To the author,
I loved your story! It was so good, but it was so sad at the end. I love how Harry sacrifieced EVERYTHING, ALL HIS MEMORIES, just for the sake of his brother and father staying alive. I love this boy so much, he is so selfless!

Oh my god, nunca pense que tendria este tipo de final, esperando un final feliz y rosa y vienes y me haces llorar...
Habia leido antes the darkness within y no habia encontrado tus otros relatos, asi que fue genial encontrar que tenias mas historias.
Hermoso relato, nunca me aburri y lo lei de un tiron, ojala sigas escribiendo ;)

I'm sorry WHAT.

I EXPECTED THIS TO BE AN AU VERSION THAT ENDED HAPPILY WITH HARRY GETTING THE CHILDHOOD HE DESERVES

I AM. HURT.

I did not sign up to feel so much emotion ohmygod.

This screwed me up, big time.
I’ll need therapy after that emotional rollercoster now

Why do you have to make Harry so arrogant and hurtful even as a 10 year old? In Canon Harry is more like his mom but here you make him look like even his personality is like James’, which it isn’t.
Plus, in canon Harry was modest and trying to be kind. He would never hurt anyone even with his words on purpose. I get that his upbringing changed him, but I thought at least as a ten year old this Wouldn’t be that prominent.
You stripped him of some of his most endearing qualities.

Cliffhanger

You’re an amazing writer! I almost never cry when I read but this made cry
Harry goes through a lot of shit and you can literally feel what he’s feeling when you read this. That is the magic of being a good writer!