Ah, this was so adorable! I've been wanting to read something really cute like this- thanks for sharing :)

That was priceless lmao. I loved it. Naoto is one smart little cookie. ;D

This is actually one of my first Persona 4 fanfictions I read. Technically, because of this, I ship Souji/Yu x Naoto to the point I'm addicted to this loveable couple.

Pls write more fanfictions of Souji/Yu x Naoto!

Omg I love this

I swear I can totally see this happening 100% if the canon truly goes all Souji/Naoto. Naoto ftw!

You got her personality right in this one. Hilarious one-shot.

Cute.

Naoto made me laugh. XD

Pfftttttt hahahhaa good one naoto! She would look adorable as a pirate captin, but Sherlock Holmes fits her better.

Next to Chie, I love seeing Naoto with Souji. They look so cute together. XDD

...XD i loved it hahahaha i thought it was going to be a chie centered one but i like naoto much better... hahaha this made me smile... thanks..

Ha, I like this story. It's cute and pretty hilarious. 3 stars, only because I don't get half of the refrences since I have no idea what Persona 4 is.

Nice Halloween Special!

Cool.

And WTF Kanji. O.o

Yay! My favorite pairing of all time in the Persona series. XDDD

I've never heard of the 'Persona' series, but this is pretty funny! It's good to see you haven't lost your creative edge! Keep on typing!