This is FANTASTIC! Its so funny, I love it!

The story started out aas Raph breaking his leg and ends up with some super-secret-thought-to-be-dead turtle getting killed by Raph. The idea was good but the story itself wasn't fleshed out as much or as smooth.
Also (plot-hole) if Pic was shot by the police I guess he was also taken into custody or atleast put into a abulance. How would they have not realised he was a giant turtle? That would've made head-lines and top-stories everywhere.

yeah, I can see why they didn't put Pic in the cartoon, he's way too dark

wait... he's an OC?

you had me fooled

I mean at the beginning I knew but I started having doubts because this is just so well done

I love it

Pic is so... dark

my favourite part was

"_Thumpthumpthump_. The sound of something being dragged. Maniacal chuckling.

After a few quiet moments, Donatello looked up again. "He's stopped."

Leonardo tossed his book up in the air. "That's what's worrying me. Come on.""

Even a couple years after reading this story the first time, I must say that this is possibly one of the greater fictions I have ever read - if not greatest one-shot.

Beautiful story! Great job ;)

it's a very good story. It made me cry. you are a good writer.

Very very good. I loved it. The pain was just so RAW. Flawless writing, very clear and to the point. Loved it.

Excellently crafted story. It had a quality equal to a multichaptered fic, it's depth and layers mesmerizing and a true measure of your talent. The few misspells or missing words that I found were miniscule compared to the breadth of this tale. Wonderfully done and worthy of a standing ovation.

And, it seems, you have moved on to other ventures outside of writing Fan Fiction. Maybe one day, your muses will lay at your feet another dustbunny to tangle with, or not. Either way, thank you for leaving your musings here for others to read.

Be blessed,

Rene'

Wow... Just wow. You really can't enjoy something from reviews about it alone. This had to be one of the best TMNT stories I've ever read. I loved the name you gave to the fifth turtle.

Good, very good.

I never realized you posted this here, too! I read this on your site (several times ;)

I absolutely love this fic (even with Evil Pic mwahahaha!

Paardon me while I go hug Raph *walks away*

Damn...'nuff said.

I love stories that have a silver-tongued monster like Picasso in them. It’s interesting how this story starts how off comedic and heads into dark territory. I’ll be voting for this story in the TMNT fanfic awards.

Awesome story.. very well written and good emotions.. I like the way Raph is portrayed... and you manage to keep some humor in this serious story... :)

I love this story...original.

My God! That was an awesome story! The best! Perfect!