Whywhywhywhwywhy WHY did she have to do a backflip. Why? It does not make sense? Like why, that was so random. Just, WHY.

Oh my God? I get that Draco was protecting Anya, but he slapped Pansy?

Already in the first chapter... you betcha? Where is she from? Minnesota?

Draco Malfoy - Slytherin Ice Prince

Good story

Grindelwald was the dark wizard not gregorovitch

ok

I used to like the story but then everything went downhill since Fourth Year-ish. The singing made me cringe every time, i actually tried to act like it didn't really happen (especially since they were muggle songs, and after Draco actually sang a 1D from 2011 in 1994-1995 I was kinda done). I'm sorry, hun, but there was a point not only Anya but the story itself became too annoying, and after reading the final author notes at every chapter, it became a bit obvious that you made Anya a Mary Sue. The break-up was messy, unfounded and very irritating, and then the fact that Narcissa 'loved' her, with her being everything she had grown up to despise. I get that it is fiction, but you cant just rip everything and take it so away from the reality! Or the fact that the OC's Patronus was stronger than Harry's for such a baseless argument. I'm sorry, but maybe you can read some other very good Draco/OC fanfics. Plus, it was like you wrote down the movies while adding a Mary Sue.

Okay so hello first of all. So I am a great Draco/OC and Dramione fan so when I saw that this story is a Draco/OC story, I went on to read it and now that I'm read it I realised it was cringe worthy. First of all, Draco grew up in a back ground where Muggle born are treated as filth and he suddenly starts to like Anya without any sort of disgust towards her. I mean, yes I understand that she is pretty and all but this was completely unrealistic because he was taught that Muggle-Borns are filth and a person cannot suddenly realise that they are not and starts liking them. Secondly, Anya well as much as I liked her in the first year, I've got to admit became a bit annoying as years passed. In the fourth year she was extremely rude and heartless towards Ron who couldn't accept his friend dated his nemesis who left no stone unturned to insult his family and you made Ron the worst person to step on the planet. And why does Anya has to hop everywhere like a rabbit? I mean the Patronous charm, Harry was the only one to learn it in the first year but no Anya had to hop over there as well and her Patronous was even more powerful than Harry's?! Bravo! And her learning the Patronous made no sense at all because it wasn't only her who was stunned by the basilisk, it was half of the Hogwrats which means that all of them should've learnt the Patronous charm. Harry was taught because his greatest fear were the dementors because they reminded him of the night his parents died and he heard his mother scream which is nothing compared to Anya.
And who is this Violet? You are adding unnecessary characters to an already perfect wizarding world. And the thing I find annoying is that this Violet is trying to match Draco and Anya.. I mean girl, stop interfering! Also Anya hangs out with Violet more than the Golden Trio which clearly shows her 'friendship'. Please do tell me who was her best friend? Hermione or Violet?
Narcissa was nice to her?! What were you thinking dude? She saved Harry but hated muggle-borns. So this concept equals to illogical. And yes! She made every single man her brother? I mean who is she? Virgin Mary?
So overall a very weak plot. Please go and read some Draco/OC books and learn from them. And if you tried to create a unique story with this one then I am sorry to burst your dream bubble that you failed because Anya was nothing but another Mary Sue.

Draco has literally done nothing to Anya and she just keeps bashing on him. Like chill girl. It's so annoying, she's just so extra it literally makes me want to puke. It's so dumb to hate people that don't do anything to you. Also, I freaking love Snape.

Such an aMAzing story! I just love how Badass Anya is! Soooo cute and just perfect! I will DEFINATELY be sharing this on tumblr!

I am really enjoying this, but I really needed to point out- Anya is SUCH A SUE! And tbh, the whole singing thing just gets really boring. You don't need to paste the whole lyrics. Otherwise, however, this is pretty good.

OMG THEY KISSED! Granted it was in the author's note but still.

never read draco/oc so cant wait to read

I have gotta say that I love your story but you made Anya a Mary Sue. I mean, Harry was the only person to produce a patronus at his age and you made Anya's patronus even powerful than his, get realistic! Harry was the main character of the story and as much as I love Draco, I've gotta say that he truly was a right foul git and you should've shown something like him insulting Anya and loving her inside and you in the fourth year, you made Ron sound as if he was the worst person present on planet earth. If we look from Rons point of view, he was right because he was always the one left out and Anya shouldn't have accepted Draco just like that, he should've apologized to Harry, Ron andHermione for all the foul he had done/said to them and for Gods sake, in the fourth year, in the book and movie, it was Hermione who was always beside him no matter what so she spent even more time than usual with Harry. In everything, which Harry did alone Anya had hop in from somewhere, like in their second year where Harry freed Dobby with his own idea, Anya had to hop in so I guess I just want to say that you should've made her a little less of a Mary Sue.