You my good sir, are a monster.

Why did you make this story soooooooo sad for him for merlin and Arthur in a cave wwwwwwwwwwwwhhhhhhhhhhyyyyyyyyyyyy

I... wow...
That was just... wow

Wow. I felt the chill of that water. Lol

I loved this so much

Wow. I could see that last moment perfectly: Merlin looking up, with tears in his eyes, maybe giving his friend one last, soft smile, before he closes his eyes forever, trembling slightly, but ready to meet his end...
Really tugged at my jeartstrings! I also lobed it when you wrote about Merlin doing "one last act of destiny", that was beautiful! *sniff*

This is... SO SAD! I had tears in my eyes! I have so much trouble finding Merlin fics where Merlin sacrifices himself for Arthur's life, and then I stumble upon your beautiful OS that has managed to make me cry! It's a pity you're not writing more about the feelings of Arthur as he falls and realizes that Merlin is dead. I would have loved you too add Merthur slash, but hey, it was beautiful all the same :) Thank you for this beautiful moment :)
(sorry for my very bad English, i'm french)

Ouch. Geez that was So sad. :(

Nice writing! :)

Brilliant death fic. I loved it.

i think you did better than some pro death fic writters i read. i accually really enjoyed this story. keep up the good work

*stares at the screen with a cruel mixture of horror and awe*

That. Was. Bloody. Fantastic.

I like how you didn't tell us it was a death fic until the very end. *rubs hands together* Yes yes, that was cruel. A wonderful writing style!

"For not having the courage to tell you myself."

AHH LET ME GO CRY NOW

Lexi

It was reeaaallly good. Heart breaking, but good!

Very good one. Merlin died...sniff :( You wrote it well, you could enter a little more emotion to pull the readers into Arthur's heartbreaking moment of realization. Pull us into Arthur's emotions but it works how you wrote it now too.

Oh God. I love this OS. This story is SO sad and so beautiful and so...STUPID! How dare you kill Merlin! It's so unfair! It's beautiful, I admit, but so unfair!

I don't know what to say other than I really enjoyed this even though Merlin died. I could actually picture this happening in my head and it was just so..Merlin. Kudos.