Reviews for Come a Little Closer
MyMagentaPeach chapter 1 . 5/27/2012
I love how this is related to the episode but still so original. Super sweet read. Thank you!
matchbookjealousy chapter 1 . 11/10/2011
aww! this was so cute!

i agree with your A/N too. even though we didn't actually see them *do* anything, it was the innocent intimacy and its implications that still satisfied my need for klaine. :) *sigh*

one part of this confused me a little. the "kurt smiles brilliantly..." sentence had me unsure of whether or not he'd actually dropped the book on the floor and all that until i got to next sentence. i think it was the tense (because the real actions and the imagined ones are both in the present tense, i mean) that made it hard to understand. thought i'd mention that.

anyway, this was really good, Mytay! keep up the great work! :) *hugs*
XxXMiyavisHeartXxX chapter 1 . 11/9/2011
So ummm continue? Cause I'd like to see Kurt's plan follow through both the one tonight and the one in a month or so ;) birthday sounds good btw :)
the darkness revealed chapter 1 . 11/9/2011
This was amazing and it had the same sweet, intimate feel that that lovely scene in the episode had. It really captured all the emotion. Perfect :D
Gildedcagesaregilded chapter 1 . 11/9/2011
Absolutely lovely.
digiMist chapter 1 . 11/9/2011
Gah! I just came from re-watching the ending scene of the episode with them all cuddly and adorable, and reading this fluffy fluff has almost made my heart explode. I loved this story, it was somewhat short, at least for you, and very sweet. The dialogue was so perfect and all of the details focused on were great. I loved the small 'waxing' joke you put in there. Sadly, those scenes were not filmed shirtless, but I could still imagine they were, and I would like to imagine Blaine with some hair. As you wrote and Kurt said, he is a man and Kurt should have nothing wrong with Blaine having some chest hair. I loved their favorite moments, Blaine's being Kurt woke him up by kissing his throat and then nose, and Kurt's moment, them just being together and holding each other. It was so adorable! All of it.

I have said this countless times before, but you are amazing and I love every thing you do. I should say I'm surprised of the quality of the story because of how quickly you put it out, but I'm honestly not. You are super talented and if anyone can put out a speedy, quality story, it is you.

digiMist
girlinthevortex chapter 1 . 11/9/2011
I want this on the show. I want to see a difference in how they behave together. Lingering touches, long gazes, that kinda thing. And you have such a good point towards the end because this isn't just a one-off, this is them having the all time in the world to explore each other and find new ways of showing their love.

God I'm such a sap today.
aunthay chapter 1 . 11/9/2011
Impeccable as usual. This made me feel as warm and fluffy as the final scene of the boys did.

And I'm not ashamed to admit I now have a new wallpaper on my laptop. It was 2 precious boys kissing in their Dalton uniforms, a bedazzled casket on the table. Now it's the same boys laying side by side, nose to nose, hands touching each other. You did such a wonderful job of extending the feelings from that scene. Great job
sexypancake chapter 1 . 11/9/2011
This was soooo sweet. I really enjoyed reading it. I also liked the little mention of Blaine shaving his chest hair. haha, really dorky and cute.
wildpeace chapter 1 . 11/9/2011
*flails*
Calli Wall chapter 1 . 11/9/2011
Beautiful.
Anonymous chapter 1 . 11/9/2011
That was so so beautiful! I loved it, and it was perfect! Thank you so much for writing this :)
shighola chapter 1 . 11/9/2011
This is perfection, sweet and intimate and loving. Just like the ep. Thank you :)
Hambeka chapter 1 . 11/9/2011
I thought Kurt and Blaine's second-favorite moments were so sweet. All the talk about Blaine being self-conscious about his chest hair is your own invention, I guess. I'm glad you put that in. The reality is first times are often awkward, in part because a person is self-conscous about their body. Still, it's nice to see Kurt so comfortable with himself and so happy with Blaine.
Ella Greggs chapter 1 . 11/9/2011
Your story was super sweet, and frankly makes me feel a lot better about Blaine and Kurt going all the way like they did. All the stuff about the sense memory sparking desire was terrific, and I loved that waking up with Kurt was Blaine's second-favorite part (good job with that subtle point about his favorite part, BTW). Personally, I think there were enough sexually active teens on that show and would have liked to see a few wait until they were older, if for no other reason than to offer a contrary example to all the other kids on that show who are extremely promiscuous. I also thought the show idealized first times way too much. But your story did a great job capturing how the sex had made Kurt and Blaine's emotional bond stronger, so that makes me feel better about them having sex.

/He loves that he can think these things, loves that he can do these things, and more than anything else, he loves that all of this, everything, is because of, with, Blaine./

It is VERY nice to see Kurt so comfortable with himself and so happy. And I like that throughout your scene you don't ignore the fact that they are in a crowded hallway in a homophobic school and so can't be as free with each other physically as a heterosexual couple could be. All in all, Mytay, as usual an excellent, emotionally spot-on one-shot.

Lastly, YES! That little bit about touching noses was just perfect. Much better than a hot and heavy make-out scene would have been, IMHO. Sometimes less really is more.
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