Since you didn't write an epilogue, I've been picturing one in my head. And for Rito it's turning into the end of Jupiter Jazz from Cowboy Bebop

You promised an epilogue?

I loved this so much!

It was nice! One huge thing though, don't put as many "..." In there. Try a comma, period, or just none at all! By constantly putting those in, it disrupts the flow of the story. Than you!

this.. is a work of art. I honestly love the way you write. imo in terms of fan fictions, you executed the characters brilliantly! Heck, I think you took it to a whole new level! You developed the characters so well, and yet still able to keep them in character. Kudos ma friend This is by far my favourite Nalu fanfiction ever. Oh and, not sure if I'm being extra or just unaware, but u said there's another and probably the last chapter after chap 20..? Well.. hasn't been updated for a while but I'm holding on to you for that! :) thank you for this wonderful ride. It has been amazing.

Meh... Good I think? To be honest I don't liked it, anyways, thanks for ur job

Tell you what this is the best fairy tail fan fic I have ever read!

I owe you a review for this story too. After reading both I can see your writing has really improved over time. Haha, and this is the story that really made me want to
Comment on how mean you are to your poor character. At more than one point I had either nearly become convinced or was convinced you were going to kill at least one of them off. I was almost in agony reading the last few chapters. Thinking for sure he was going to die. I was like "no! I shouldn't have read this! She wrote a deathfic as her first story on this site so she is going to kill him for sure!" And then of course at the last possible second you save him lol...yeah, I get way too emotionally invested in characters. Even though I am not big into original characters, I admit to being disappointed that the epilogue was never posted. I really wanted to know what happened to the guy who saved natsu' life and spares me terrible emotional trauma! Gah! Perhaps one day I will get to find out. Thanks so much for the great entertainment!

gray's line xp

Your one of the best fanfic writers I've ever seen! There are hardly any spelling mistakes. Keep up the good work! :D

Ha its so mushy!

Ok the only reason I laughed the entire way through reading this is because I was listening to the most irrelevant song "smile smile smile" from the show mlp

THIS WAS AWESOME OMG

aww this was cute but gory and a little angsty but that's ok it's good for you now and then. Nalu always makes me happy but its midnight and i have to get up at 5:45...good story even though you stole my sleep.

Ok this might sound dark but I think it would have been better if Natsu died it would be sweeter that way lol that sounded so dark