I am Brazilian and your story ended with me. It's already on my list of favorites, because it's so wonderful. But I will not deny that I am crying for her. I loved the story very much.

I spent six hours non-stop reading this story until the end! The suspense is great and it's really a page-turner! It's amazing and the character of Snape is so well shaped, I like very much the so "snapish" way of responding and acting in the dungeon. The character of Hermione is less convincing and in my opinion weaker than what she ought to be: she does not really use her brain and is stubborn like Harry. The whole setting makes the tension escalate, but the final scenes of body contact are a little bit lacking - Hermione should think more before act, otherwise her reaction is more of Stockholm syndrome, and it's still more difficult to explain their connection the other way around - why Snape would have some feeling for Hermione? The epilogue is surprising but has its own logic and I feel that the author wants to convey some message other than SS/HG: it is never right to torture or injure someone without his/her consent even if it's for good cause.

Sorry but your fan fiction story is a 30 chapters long foreplay - and no orgasm.

I’ve just wasted 3 days of my reading it... I want those 3 days back.

This story is not worth the time - and not worth the many reviews it has received.

Sorry.

I like this story .

I honestly cant believe how you ended it, I'm furious, and hysterical in my laughter, I had to choke back a sob when she was obliviated, and again when we returned to the shrieking shack.
Im absolutely gobsmacked, and emotional, so thank you, for writing something that brought all of those emotions from me.

I keep returning to this story. It haunts me and makes me cry! But it is an excellent story. Thank you!

This fic was... frustrating. You write like English is your second language, so I preface any criticism with admiration for you writing a piece of this length in a secondary language. But so many things could have been helped by a good beta. There was definitely a lot of stilted language, and it took until Chapter 29 for you to finally use the right form of breathe instead of breath which you used incorrectly seemingly everywhere in the fic. A very frustrating thing is the unevenness. This story had such great promise with its plot and the twist. but the foreshadowing just left a lot to be desired. And most frustrating of all, you did a great job capturing Snape's voice! So many scenes I could picture him saying and doing perfectly. But this Hermione was so OOC that you could as well have said almost any other character and it would have worked. Ginny? Lavendar Brown? A self creation? This character was not Hermione. I actually laughed out loud when at one point Hermione apologized for acting immature, because I thought the same thing for so many chapters. Her dialogue, her thought processes, her decisions all were just... not Hermione. We've seen Hermione stay strong and stoic and sensible under literal torture from Bellatrix, remain suspicious and analytical over nearly every plot device save Lockhart, etc. I would have loved to see actual Hermione in this situation, not this odd teenage creation.

Dumbledore is mad

Wow... it's so...
I think I'll never forget this ending. It is very... impressive.

This fic... this story... It destroyed me. It's dark, cruel, beautiful. I love how you used short sentences, because I think longer paragraphs would not have had the same result as your writing style. And the suspense, the mystery, the epic plottwist at the end... Thank you. I hope I will never forget this fanfic.

I have never seen other stories with this twist. I think you are the first

I feel like it will be like BAM this was a test from the order of the Phoenix to see if u would crack under torture and give us up we had to make you prove your loyalty

I really don't like it when the bad guys get away with their actions, I wish I had know it before reading. sorry writer but your last two chapters ruined the whole story

THIS IS SO VERY GOOD! The best story I ever read! Omg I don’t even have word for this...so sad, so...the ending was NOT what I was expecting! Thanks for writing this amazing story! I enjoyed it very very much!

...I’m done. This twist...I need to sleep