Reviews for Running
lovepride chapter 7 . 1/22/2013
very good
squirtlee16 chapter 7 . 9/30/2012
I can't wait to see how the conference goes! I love it :)
Hildolfr chapter 7 . 6/8/2012
:) whats going to happen i want to know how will this conference go down.
Casey.Ruby.Fan chapter 7 . 4/14/2012
Just caught up on this story and it is fantastic! You ended it on a cliffhanger and I can't wait to read more. Please please please update soon :)
jamyj30 chapter 7 . 3/27/2012
looks like the conference is going to be interesting... cant wait for more
Nerdy Fashionista chapter 7 . 3/23/2012
Ah, again with the cliff hangers! Cx

GOOD CHAPTER!
AllLeyton chapter 7 . 3/22/2012
Awesome... loved it can't wait to see where you're going with it.. Update soon
sfbxfcb chapter 7 . 3/19/2012
Wonderful!
Sara chapter 7 . 3/18/2012
Good, plz more soon
jamyj30 chapter 6 . 1/15/2012
Great update, loved it, cant wait for more, update soon
Mcsexielover chapter 1 . 1/14/2012
Oh, I'm sorry for all the spelling and typing errors in my previous review- I was typing fast from my phone...

Update soon:)
Mcsexielover chapter 6 . 1/14/2012
Defnitely a leyton. Peyton never has, never will, belong to jake. Nor will lucas ever belong with brooke. Its just written in the stars.

BUT the fact that you made lucas already married with potentially two children, its going to be really difficult for you to have them find their way back to each other. Marriage and children changes everythingk too strong bonds have been formed and makes it difficult for me to see why he would leave everything to be with a girl he was in love with sixteen years ago.

I really don't like your peyton. What she did is unforgivable- choosing to keep anna from her biological father and not giving him a choice in the matter. He missed het whole life. Not to mention the way she spoke to her father, knowing he is right about telling luke.

I also noticed a few grammar and spelling errors- sometimes your sentences are too long and rushed. I hope it makes sense. I'm only telling you this so you can double check your next chapter.

Overall, I like your story and the concept. I'm really interested to see how you are going to bring the couple back together bacause there are so many betrayals and obstacles that may make it difficult for ypu to make their reunion realistic. I'm sure you knew what you were doing so I can't wait to see what you bring forward. Thanks for writing!
cabentley chapter 6 . 1/12/2012
very good. No offense or anything would love to see Leyton!
lukenpeyton-puckleberry-4ever chapter 6 . 1/12/2012
Letting please
sfbxfcb chapter 6 . 1/12/2012
Wonderful! Jeyton!
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