I really like the story, I just wish that their "sexy time" was longer and more detailed, but other than that it was a really good read!

I love this so much *.*

oh goooooodddddd that was perfect in so many ways there needs to be another hundred levels above perfect for me to be able to properly rate this wonderful creation of wonder. so good and cute and yes :3

No man. This was so productive. I have to fire you. I don't even know what I'm saying but let's all pretend it makes sense. Okay. That said, now this.
I really love the point of view. I think you nailed Tavros' and Gamzees' personalities, I don't care what anyone else has to say on that. Screw them. You did really good with the personalities.
The way you described Gamzee during the sex with sweat and omg. I got chills and was like. I want you Gamz.
I especially like how you described the feels of the sex, and not the actions as much. It makes it more interesting and it seems more meaningful. It gave me a good impression on how strongly they felt for each other.
The last part, Gamzees' confession of love for Tavros(through words) was perfect. Seriously, no Joker here. *throws a fit* they just.
You squished them together in the strongest jam of pbnj and didn't make it messy. Every thing you wrote fit together so perfectly. Evenly the changing through time fit very well. This is a really long note now, but I'm sure you're okay with that cus 1: I'm done and 1: I loved this story.
I'm proud of you. (Also, perhaps a consideration of continuation would be nice?)

3 so fucking adorable _

I'ss so beautiful man. Herr meh gurd, like this is the best muthufuckin pb&j like tears are fallin from my eyes. YOU DON'T EVEN KNOW.

oh lord that was the absolute most amazing thing i've ever read.

Ok:) you made me ship this

Beautiful...just...incredibly written, and you managed to keep them in character throughout the entire story. I admire your writing skills and your genius mind.
Love and Zombies,
MH

that was good i love this story out of all i have read

This was entirely beautiful and I am now sad that your account link does not work D: tHE TERRIBLENESS! This is the best gamztav scene I've seen yet. It's like miracles. Seriously. XD

Eeeeeeee! I was just thinking to myself, There needs to be more GOOD GamTav fanfictions. And then I found this, and I was like Sweet holy mother of buckets that's good.

BEAUTIFUL

ok im sorry but im gonna have to hug you for making such and epic story! *hugs* I TIP MY TINY TOP HAT TO YOU SIR! w

I really like this, good job.