Reviews for Dining on Apricots
Girl of Blue Fire chapter 17 . 6/2
I enjoy this story and how you've developed the softer side of Kaiba - his insecurity, fear of rejection and neediness. The scenes between him and Anzu are alternately funny and hot. The love scenes are particularly well done too. But I have to say I hate him pressuring her to give up on her creative dream. It just feels all wrong to me, esp as a person who's devoted their life to their creativity and like Anzu suffered for it (although not physically.) To hear him and others reiterate the same poisonous things to her about 'making a career' etc is really painful and is stopping me from enjoying this. I'm not saying it's unrealistic - Kaiba has an immature and selfish streak - but it's hard esp as still too many girls and women are conditioned to let go of their dreams and independence for a man. It also particularly rankles me because a)Kaiba should be able to understand and respect devoting oneself to a dream like him with KaibaCorp/KaibaLand and his inventions and b) he's a freaking BILLIONAIRE, of anyone in the world he could make this work and not force her to choose ffs! Sorry it just makes me mad, like I said it's not unrealistic, I'm just not sympathetic to him right now, esp after he pushed sexual advances on her without getting her consent first in a previous chapter, then gaslit her about it. I know it's a fanfic and all and we know she wants him too, it's just too well written and developed for me not to feel these things. Anyway, I doubt you will see this after all these years but I felt i should say it. Great writing as always, just frustrating plot at this point. Take care.
Girl of Blue Fire chapter 10 . 5/17
Wow, what a scene! I thought managed their completing desires and feelings of vulnerability very well. I still couldn't believe though that a) Kaiba had the nerve to initiate a sex act like that without her consent even though she ended up enjoying it AND had the nerve to tell her to stop asking questions about his motives after! I would have slapped him! Nonetheless an interesting exploration of this pairing which I love. I hope you return at some point. All the best! Ps I love the food themes too!
Guest chapter 21 . 7/3/2018
Soooo, are you ever gonna come back and finish this amazing work you started or are you just gonna leave us hanging?
CaptnBeck chapter 1 . 4/1/2018
I know it's a long shot, but I do hope you find the inspiration to update this story one day! I reread it from time to time and fall in love with it all over again!
AlisonDDD chapter 21 . 3/8/2018
please update!!!!this story is amazing!!!!!
Guest chapter 21 . 6/16/2017
Please update this story
EclipseLove chapter 8 . 4/15/2017
3 3 3 3
Serenity Jennifer West chapter 21 . 1/12/2017
I think I've read this story bout 5 times bt yea itz alil more post cannon azureshipping story ive read in a min there r only so few out there. Bt I gotta question how old is Mokuba in this story?
black dragon chapter 21 . 4/6/2016
please please finish i love this story ive been reading it since yesterday like a book i couldnt put phone down it seems a bit open end if you have finished i would love yugis responce and joeys and mokoba being more happy about tea/anzu
charlatain chapter 21 . 3/2/2016
Been a while since I've been in this fandom, but you ma'am, have brought me back full force. Please update when you get the chance, k?
Guest chapter 13 . 12/25/2015
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! YOU TOTALLY NEED TO UPDATE! THIS IS SUCH A WONDERFUL STORY THAT CANNOT BE ABANDONED.
Guest chapter 21 . 12/12/2015
I just read this story for the second time and fell in love all over again. I know it's been quite some time since you last updated but I would love for you to continue this story. Please!
DistantStorm chapter 21 . 11/9/2015
There are no words to accurately describe how much I'd love for you to continue this fic. There just arent. I love the way you write Azureshipping, you keep both of them in character flawlessly.
FleurMiroir chapter 10 . 2/18/2015
I must say, you definitely write some of the best YGO fictions around!
I really like AzureShipping and I think you've catched both characters' personalities perfectly!
Besides, they're realistic and relatable. I also particularily enjoy that you keep your stories culturally accurate. Keep up the good work! Thus far, I'm really enjoying this fic.
Luna chapter 21 . 2/9/2015
Please please continue! I read from chapter one nonstop! It is such a great story and I like the interactions between the two. Thank you and please update!
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